तुम्हे याद करू तो अपना अस्तित्व लगे है
तुम्हे दिल मे रखु तो दिल खूश रहता है
जहा तूम नहीं वहां उदासी घेर लेती है
तुम्हारी याद बिना यह दुनिया बेसुरी लगती है
तुम्हारी कल्पना करता हूँ और
मेरी हरेक कल्पना रंगीन हो जाती है
उन्ही रंगों मे भी अनेक रंग समां जाते है
उन्ही रंगों मे इक प्रेम का रंग होता है
जो तुम्हारी जिस्म की महक का आगाज़ करता है
हम तुम्हे याद करने लग जाते है
और तुम्हारी यादों मे अपना अस्तिव खोजने लगते है.
#1 by Sandesh Gupta
Kya baat hai Aameen Sahab. Kamal ki shayri.
#2 by mohd alam
wonderful lines
#3 by Archana Srivastava
bahut khoob likha hai aapne..!
#4 by mohd ansari
nice one
#5 by mukundkamlakar
Hi, Aameenji, GoodMorning, Hamesha ki tarha ye bhi bahoot khoobsurat kavita hai,
Aagar yaaden na hoti to hamari jindagi na hoti, yaadoen ke rang bhi Aangeenat hai.
#6 by Shashi
superb………..Chaahenge Umar Bhar Hum Subah Sham Tumko Humne Bana Liya Hai Dil Ka Arman Tumko Mere Siva Kisi Par Nazarein-Karam Na Karna Sitam Koi Karna Bas Ye Sitam Na Karna Apne Dil Se Ye Pyar Kam Na Karna
#7 by Brij Tripathi
Lovely
#8 by DrVikash Mangal
Vah kya baat hai Ameen bhai. Aap ne to mere man ki baat kah di. Vastav me badi sundar kavita hai.
#9 by Roohee Naaz
masallah bahut khubsurat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
#10 by Greshma
thank u sir…. and what i can write abt ur this poem…it’s as sweet as always… as emotional as all ur poems…$$
#11 by Prateeksha
तुम्हारी याद बिना यह दुनिया बेसुरी लगती है ……….lovely lines..thanx:)
#12 by geetasharma
Hmmmmmmmmm………………..cool……….it’s like tht…song…..na…Mere rang mein rangne wali…..!!!!!!!!!!
#13 by jigna mehta
Someone who has felt these emotion’s can only write abt them with such passion .Lucky u,by the way its very GOOd
#14 by Amisha Nair
perfect analysis of the person deeply in love
#15 by Swati Garg
Pyar ek pooja hai. Jaha pyar hai vaha har cheez pyari ho jati hai . Jaha pyar nahi vaha har cheez biran lagne lagti hai. Is khubh surat kavita me aap ne apne ko badi hi khubhsurti se byan kiya hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise aapne apni aatma hi isme dal hi hai. Aapka bahut bahut dhanyavad.
#16 by Sunita Mukherjee
Tumhare sath bitayen hue har pal ko samet kar iss tarah rakhun ki saari zindagi un yaadon se khushnuma bani rahen…Beautiful thoughts Aameenji..Moments spent with someone is very special and i can spent my whole life with those few beautiful moments…
#17 by sureshchandra Gupta
Shyam ke rang mein rang gayi sham aur na mera duja dham. Ye prem ka rang hai rang hai khan sahab isme mein iske sivah kuchh nazar nahi aata hai.
Prem bhav mein bhigi sundar kavita.
#18 by Shiny Vikas
Aameenji!you have written this poetry with so much of emotions…so accha tho jarur hona hai!very very sweet ,loving composition indeed!
#19 by Dilip Bangthai
superb!
yaad rahe tumhare mere pyare…
rahe ham hokar tumhare hi aapne…