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BEEN TUUM…………


 
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तुम्हे
 याद करू तो अपना अस्तित्व लगे है


तुम्हे दिल मे रखु तो दिल खूश रहता है


जहा तूम नहीं वहां उदासी घेर लेती है  


तुम्हारी याद बिना यह दुनिया बेसुरी लगती है


 


तुम्हारी कल्पना करता हूँ और  


मेरी हरेक कल्पना रंगीन हो जाती है


उन्ही रंगों मे भी अनेक रंग समां जाते है


उन्ही रंगों मे इक प्रेम का रंग होता है


जो तुम्हारी जिस्म की महक का आगाज़ करता  है


 


हम तुम्हे  याद करने  लग जाते है


और तुम्हारी यादों  मे अपना अस्तिव खोजने लगते है.


 …………………………………aameen

  1. #1 by Sandesh Gupta

    Kya baat hai Aameen Sahab. Kamal ki shayri.

  2. #2 by mohd alam

    wonderful lines

  3. #3 by Archana Srivastava

    bahut khoob likha hai aapne..!

  4. #4 by mohd ansari

    nice one

  5. #5 by mukundkamlakar

    Hi, Aameenji, GoodMorning, Hamesha ki tarha ye bhi bahoot khoobsurat kavita hai,
    Aagar yaaden na hoti to hamari jindagi na hoti, yaadoen ke rang bhi Aangeenat hai.

  6. #6 by Shashi

    superb………..Chaahenge Umar Bhar Hum Subah Sham Tumko Humne Bana Liya Hai Dil Ka Arman Tumko Mere Siva Kisi Par Nazarein-Karam Na Karna Sitam Koi Karna Bas Ye Sitam Na Karna Apne Dil Se Ye Pyar Kam Na Karna

  7. #7 by Brij Tripathi

    Lovely

  8. #8 by DrVikash Mangal

    Vah kya baat hai Ameen bhai. Aap ne to mere man ki baat kah di. Vastav me badi sundar kavita hai.

  9. #9 by Roohee Naaz

    masallah bahut khubsurat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. #10 by Greshma

    thank u sir…. and what i can write abt ur this poem…it’s as sweet as always… as emotional as all ur poems…$$

  11. #11 by Prateeksha

    तुम्हारी याद बिना यह दुनिया बेसुरी लगती है ……….lovely lines..thanx:)

  12. #12 by geetasharma

    Hmmmmmmmmm………………..cool……….it’s like tht…song…..na…Mere rang mein rangne wali…..!!!!!!!!!!

  13. #13 by jigna mehta

    Someone who has felt these emotion’s can only write abt them with such passion .Lucky u,by the way its very GOOd

  14. #14 by Amisha Nair

    perfect analysis of the person deeply in love :-)

  15. #15 by Swati Garg

    Pyar ek pooja hai. Jaha pyar hai vaha har cheez pyari ho jati hai . Jaha pyar nahi vaha har cheez biran lagne lagti hai. Is khubh surat kavita me aap ne apne ko badi hi khubhsurti se byan kiya hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise aapne apni aatma hi isme dal hi hai. Aapka bahut bahut dhanyavad.

  16. #16 by Sunita Mukherjee

    Tumhare sath bitayen hue har pal ko samet kar iss tarah rakhun ki saari zindagi un yaadon se khushnuma bani rahen…Beautiful thoughts Aameenji..Moments spent with someone is very special and i can spent my whole life with those few beautiful moments…

  17. #17 by sureshchandra Gupta

    Shyam ke rang mein rang gayi sham aur na mera duja dham. Ye prem ka rang hai rang hai khan sahab isme mein iske sivah kuchh nazar nahi aata hai.
    Prem bhav mein bhigi sundar kavita.

  18. #18 by Shiny Vikas

    Aameenji!you have written this poetry with so much of emotions…so accha tho jarur hona hai!very very sweet ,loving composition indeed!

  19. #19 by Dilip Bangthai

    superb!
    yaad rahe tumhare mere pyare…
    rahe ham hokar tumhare hi aapne…

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