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हुए जख्म दिल पर और आँखों को असर हो गयी
प्यार में मेरी बर्बादी दुनिया मे मशहूर हो गयी
नहीं समझ मे आती आज भी तेरी जुदाई की वजह
ख्यालों में खो
प्रेम पथ पर बनाया था इक सपनों का महल
विश्वास के दीवारों पर आज इक दरार हो गयी
मेरी कब्र पर इक दिन निकल आएगी घासफूस
दूनिया कहेगी देखो हरियाली ही हरियाली हो गयी…………
…………………………………………….aameen
#1 by anju Kashmir Chand Chopra
very beautiful poem
#2 by aneesa matte
nice poem
#3 by ritu
khushiyon se jhomti -gaati aap ki rachnaaon me dard aa gaya hai,par achhi hoti hai…
#4 by chetan lakhani
ohhhhhhh ! yar dil tutta hai to awaz nahi aati her kisi ko mahobat raz nahi aati,ye tokhel hai wafa aur bewafai ka koi kisiko bhultanahi aur kisi ko kisi ki yad bhi aati nahiiiiiii
#5 by amn888
beautiful
#6 by Shashi
nice post …….Yaadon ko yaad karke lagta hai,
hum Zindagi ke kitne karib hain…..
#7 by mukundkamlakar
Hi Aameenji, Hamesha ki taraha ye rachna bhi sunder hai, Dil ko choone wali, Mast, mast, hai.
Thanks for sharing nice ,touchable, beautiful, excellent,composition
#8 by rao aelbeena
very nice beautifullllllllllllllllll
#9 by Sanjay Khare
dil ki gahraiyo se nikli awaj hai… really nice combination.. thanks for sharing.
#10 by Roohee Naaz
beautifully expressed the feeling ,,
#11 by Swati Garg
Premi dil ki baat na duniya ko samajh aati hai aur na hi premika ko. Ek ajeeb hi kahani hai prem ki. Yahan to kahin deep jale kahin dil wali baat hai. Bahut khubsurat rachna hai aapki.
#12 by DrVikash Mangal
It is really a beautiful but heart touching poem.
#13 by Sureshchandra Gupta
Bahut hi sundar rachna shayad mein lipti huyi par gamon mein dubi huyi.
#14 by Dilip Bangthai
aacha laga…aapka toh jawab nhi, saron taraf pyar pyar….
#15 by mohd alam
dil ke haalaat baya kar diye
#16 by Fenku
bahut hi toching peom hai…
#17 by Fenku
bahut hi toching peom hai…
#18 by Amisha Nair
an emotional composition !
#19 by Hina Rizvi
sweet thoughts
#20 by Sunita Mukherjee
Excellent Composition Ameenji…I liked it
#21 by Archana Srivastava
wow… very touchy!
#22 by geetasharma
chaar dino ka pyaar hai rabba….badi lumbi judaiiiii………………nice post