TERI JUUDAAYI


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हुए जख्म दिल पर और आँखों को असर हो गयी


प्यार में मेरी बर्बादी दुनिया मे मशहूर हो गयी


 


नहीं समझ मे आती आज भी तेरी जुदाई की वजह


ख्यालों में खो गया और सुबह हो गयी


 


प्रेम पथ पर बनाया था इक सपनों का महल  


विश्वास के दीवारों पर आज इक दरार हो गयी


 


मेरी कब्र पर इक दिन निकल आएगी घासफूस


दूनिया कहेगी देखो हरियाली ही हरियाली हो गयी…………
…………………………………………….aameen


  1. #1 by anju Kashmir Chand Chopra

    very beautiful poem

  2. #2 by aneesa matte

    nice poem

  3. #3 by ritu

    khushiyon se jhomti -gaati aap ki rachnaaon me dard aa gaya hai,par achhi hoti hai…

  4. #4 by chetan lakhani

    ohhhhhhh ! yar dil tutta hai to awaz nahi aati her kisi ko mahobat raz nahi aati,ye tokhel hai wafa aur bewafai ka koi kisiko bhultanahi aur kisi ko kisi ki yad bhi aati nahiiiiiii

  5. #5 by amn888

    beautiful

  6. #6 by Shashi

    nice post …….Yaadon ko yaad karke lagta hai,
    hum Zindagi ke kitne karib hain…..

  7. #7 by mukundkamlakar

    Hi Aameenji, Hamesha ki taraha ye rachna bhi sunder hai, Dil ko choone wali, Mast, mast, hai.
    Thanks for sharing nice ,touchable, beautiful, excellent,composition

  8. #8 by rao aelbeena

    very nice beautifullllllllllllllllll

  9. #9 by Sanjay Khare

    dil ki gahraiyo se nikli awaj hai… really nice combination.. thanks for sharing.

  10. #10 by Roohee Naaz

    beautifully expressed the feeling ,,

  11. #11 by Swati Garg

    Premi dil ki baat na duniya ko samajh aati hai aur na hi premika ko. Ek ajeeb hi kahani hai prem ki. Yahan to kahin deep jale kahin dil wali baat hai. Bahut khubsurat rachna hai aapki.

  12. #12 by DrVikash Mangal

    It is really a beautiful but heart touching poem.

  13. #13 by Sureshchandra Gupta

    Bahut hi sundar rachna shayad mein lipti huyi par gamon mein dubi huyi.

  14. #14 by Dilip Bangthai

    aacha laga…aapka toh jawab nhi, saron taraf pyar pyar….

  15. #15 by mohd alam

    dil ke haalaat baya kar diye

  16. #16 by Fenku

    bahut hi toching peom hai…

  17. #17 by Fenku

    bahut hi toching peom hai…

  18. #18 by Amisha Nair

    an emotional composition !

  19. #19 by Hina Rizvi

    sweet thoughts

  20. #20 by Sunita Mukherjee

    Excellent Composition Ameenji…I liked it

  21. #21 by Archana Srivastava

    wow… very touchy!

  22. #22 by geetasharma

    chaar dino ka pyaar hai rabba….badi lumbi judaiiiii………………nice post



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