चाहिए संसार को की दे शूल को प्रतिक्षण बधाई
क्योंकि उसने बन धरापर फूल की कीमत बढ़ाई
अगर न होते शूल, फूल ही फूल होते चमन मे
रूप, रस, मकरंद सभी सूलभ होता चमन मे
लेकिन फिर इन फूलोंके प्रति गहन ममता न होती
जो शूल की तीखी चुभन ने आज हममे जगाई
चाहिए संसार को की दे शूल को प्रतिक्षण बधाई
चांदनी का मै पुजारी, चाँद पर तन-मन न्योछावर
चाँद ह्रदय में जीता है, चिन्ह अमावस के छिपाकर
अगर न होती अमावस तो कौन पूनम को बुलाता
सच कहू हर रात देख पूनम मेरा मन ऊब जाता
इसीलिए मेरे ह्रदय ने गीत अमावस पर बनाए
क्योंकि उसने बन धरा पर चाँद की कीमत बढ़ाई………
……………………………………………………………………. aameen
……………………………………………………………………. aameen
#1 by Alan
चांदनी का मै पुजारी, चाँद पर तन-मन न्योछावर
चाँद ह्रदय में जीता है, चिन्ह अमावस के छिपाकर
अगर न होती अमावस तो कौन पूनम को बुलाता
सच कहू हर रात देख पूनम मेरा मन ऊब जाता
#2 by Sameera Nandi
Hello Aameen…came to ur page after a long time. As usual, you have written beautifully. Hope things are well with you. Cheers, Sameera
#3 by Sangeeta Modi
bahut khub
#4 by chandrakant parmar
wah ammeenji……………….bahut dino bad kuchha achchha padhane ko mila……abhi mumbai me hun……..
#5 by palak.das
bahut badhiya….चाँद ह्रदय में जीता है, चिन्ह अमावस के छिपाकर…
#6 by Hina Rizvi
very nice. bade din bad aaj blog khola apki nazm waqai bahut achhi hai.best wishes , aise hi likhte rahiye. sahi kaha ki rat se hi subah ki haqiqat hai. khoobsurat phhol ki ahmiyat kanton ke beech hi hai.
#7 by rao aelbeena
very well said,nice pic
#8 by Amisha Nair
wah bass yeh khyaal agar har ek apne mann mei le kar jee le to jeevan aur sambandho ka roop aur sunder ho jaaye…
#9 by rao aelbeena
beautifulllllllllllllllllll very nice…
#10 by Shivendra Singh
bahut sunder….. jeevan ko dekhne ka ek sunder nazariya….
#11 by sangeetha
its so true. if we dont face agony we’l never value happiness. just one sugesstion plz increase the font size. its seems difficult to read.
#12 by vibha kohli
hi aameen
apkne lines nahut sunder likhi hai . apne jo topic liya hai its very nice .
#13 by mohd ansari
kya chand hai aapka
wonderful
#14 by Pradeep
Agar na hoti amawas to kaun poonam ko bulaata …. bahut khoob ameenji …. thnx for the share
#15 by geetasharma
very nice…………..
#16 by geetasharma
nice composition………….!!!!!!!!!!!keep it up
#17 by Shiny Vikas
so nice Aameenji…you have a very good writing….very good literary i can say ..best wishes!
#18 by Sunita Mukherjee
Yes, we often take things for granted when they come easily to us…Nice post..very Nice.
#19 by Dilip Bangthai
beautiful composition, more than the scenic veiw!
#20 by Fenku
bahut hi uttma rachanaa….
#21 by Anju Pangty
चाहिए संसार को की दे शूल को प्रतिक्षण बधाई उसने बन धरापर फूल की कीमत बढ़ाई…………………
Ameenji…………bahut sunder rachna………….. shabdon aur bhaavnaon ka khubsurat samnvaya……….shukriya.
#22 by Imtiyaz Shaikh
Sir kaafi dino baad aane ke baad aise laga jaise kal hi ek dost se mulaqat hui.Too touchy words ……..sorry for late reply
#23 by Khyati Shah
Aameenji bahut hi khub…
#24 by sandhya kulkarni
Hi..!! Aameen.. very nice..post after very long time.. bahut achcha laga padh kar aapko ..kese hain..?
#25 by manasi
Brilliant and …ya…I see a change here…going a bit philosophical…but yes…everything in this world is relative…without darkness..no one would know what is brightness…….and importance of happiness can be felt only after pains…how very true Aameen…kudos for that. Tell u the truth..this is ur best till now……off-beat……ha..ha..
#26 by Brij Tripathi
Hi Ameen, it’s too good.A absolute new thought…bahut achchha hai…. badhayi
#27 by Shatrughna Singh
Hi Aameen
Itna sunder kaise likh lete ho yaar? Bikul kisi kavi ki terah likha hai aapne. Bahut achche.
with best wishes
Shatrughna
#28 by Laxmi
you gave a new perspective to beauty of this world…..very true.. good would not have been good without bad……well written and thought….variety is the spice of life
keep writing!
#29 by SHEKHAR BHATTACHARJEE
yes ……..very good …aameen…..my frnd…….a new one……..keepit up