The sting of love
Just bit me hard
And hit me out of play.
That made me numb
In head and heart
And froze me for a day.
I still look lost
To friends around
They hug me to ensure
Say, "All is fine."
"It's all that is."
"To every sting's a cure."
My vision blurred
My mind sloshed out
A crazy song on lips.
In need for speed
To liven life
I let love give me creeps.
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A love song befitting our confused times. Both hedonistic and attention challenged, at once. CREEPY? Yeah!
love loved this song
Loved the last line “I let love give me the creeps” fabzzulous!!
well gone down……to liven life i let love give me creeps……
A very ”unlike Ze” poem! Lovely pic!
Yea…ditto FG, liked me the rhythm! very nice!
Very nice. Zeus
Janabe aali………Love’’s sting…….ever to remember never tobe forgoteen…….
wonderful love song
Oh Wow!…you”ve been hit hard…No wonder you feel the creeps….
oho….whts up with this genre of love zeus??
when..where..how…what…n who?? caused this..
The pic is killing me softly!
wonderful expresion
I think your visual goes well with your poem. The strawberry looks like the decapitated head of a praying mantis :0 … goes with the pain, the creeps et al.
i let love give the creeps.. quite a line..
good one
Hmm… nice rhythm! One could very well sing it, or recite it as a poem.
Well here’’s a {hug} for you and reassurance that all is well with the world and you…. take care… write more poetry… bcus poetry is the best medicine.
Singing your song 0f Love now … Not yours actually… mine too… his too & hers… too… of Us all! :O) Zeus… I feel happy when one is lost in Love! :0) waiting for the pic too… sending loves as always… Pra~! :O)