Narrow lanes.
Brick-lined curbs.
Scattered rows of human hearth.
And then the never ending road
Stubborn not to end.
Jaded clouds
Smiling men in rainbow shrouds
Walking down the treaded path
Stopping by the bend.
Eager eyes.
In teary mess.
Drinking down the loneliness
Peppered with the bitter snack
Of love not making way.
Hatred frowns.
Freeze in time.
Lavenders with lilies rhyme
Joyous dance the young at heart.
To lose the squandered day.
This one has a lyrical quality to it. Takes me to the old classic (Turn, turn turn..) used for the theme of “Picket Fences” ….By the Platters if memory serves me rt… The black and white pic of the solitary soul on the beach adds flavour with the slivery streak of dawn (i hope) just behind him. Lovely~~!
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Such wonderful thoughts at such a young age.Keep it up.Shubho Bijoya.Shikha mashi.
Felt like a cool stream passing over my skin and cleaning up all tiredness……….wud like to recite it sometimes ……if u permit:)
a balanced composition of dark shades with a silver lining…..
good
ZZ..What should I do nxt…do I continue on the lonliness note? T
nice expression
Maybe the ”loose” on the last line should be ”lose”?
Loved the last two stanzas… and the cadence, the rhythm. Warm Regards, Ghost
a time to love, a time to pause, a time to read another lovely poem from Z2…the black and white frame, with its lights and shdows, is one of the best i have ever seen! thanks Zeus…
Lovely one with some unique phrases… You can do much better!
Beautiful. remembered the song… ” Where is the time to hate? When there’’s so little time to Love!!! ” Sending you loves now dear Zeus… Your friend, Pra~! :O)
lovely………
great expressions………
keep it up !
ummm…..beautiful
most of our roads have lost their kerbs. you see more pot holes!
Nice poem with great words.
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Splendid,Awesome,Mindblowing!!!! Liked the pesonification implied here.My fav lines in this poem are: Eager eyes.In teary mess.Drinking down the loneliness, Peppered with the bitter snack, Of love not making way….. hmmm Peppered…..Reshu.