No song this!
June 30th, 2010
It is good to know
So far you had kept score
And said good bye once more
I wondered, a little hurt
Is it your denial
That makes me wait at the glass turnstile
Watching through
Waiting for you…
It is good to know
I have a mind too
Today I began to face
I removed the trace
Where you had once held
The reins and the mace
So I do things now
Just my own way-
I use the spade
Bury my treasures and spray
A little water on the sapling
A tuberose
On the graves- those
Memories
That I held so close!
It is good to know
It is a monsoon
Without a tomorrow
And a winter so far
That I would lose today’s scars
What more do I say?
Just go away…
No scores
Nothing open…
Just barricades
Blackened windows
No doors!
this one
wow……..good one
Ah! What a post… memories of loved ones..but i think i can spend my whole life thinking of beautiful moments with someone special..may be very few
Pain and surrender,
no cruelty and yes,
no song- this!
It hurts!
But there is passion-
Do not let it go away
It will stay!
And you-
A poet or not
Is cherished
and loved!
KB, I don’t like this poem.
You can do better and best!
Cheers!
D hurt, d pain, d denail brought out very effectively. Gud read.
There is a thin line between cruelty and kindness, often we cross it at our own convenience, just so we can live in prisons of our own