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Mousetrap

 

A mouse looked through the crack in the wall to see the farmer and his
wife open a package. “What food might this contain?” the mouse
wondered. He was devastated to discover it was a mousetrap.

Retreating to the farmyard, the mouse proclaimed the warning: “There is
a mousetrap in the house! There is a mousetrap in the house!”

The chicken clucked and scratched, raised her head and said, “Mr. Mouse,
I can tell this is a grave concern to you, but it is of no consequence
to me. I cannot be bothered by it.”

The mouse turned to the pig and told him, “There is a mousetrap in the
house! There is a mousetrap in the house!” The pig sympathized, but
said, “I am so very sorry, Mr. Mouse, but there is nothing I can do
about it but pray. Be assured you are in my prayers.”

The mouse turned to the cow and said, “There is a mousetrap in the
house! There is a mousetrap in the house!”

The cow said, “Wow, Mr. Mouse. I’m sorry for you, but it’s no skin off
my nose.”

So, the mouse returned to the house, head down and dejected, to face the
farmer’s mousetrap alone.

That very night a sound was heard throughout the house — like the sound
of a mousetrap catching its prey.

The farmer’s wife rushed to see what was caught. In the darkness, she
did not see it was a venomous snake whose tail the trap had caught.

The snake bit the farmer’s wife. The farmer rushed her to the hospital,
and she returned home with a fever. Everyone knows you treat a fever
with fresh chicken soup, so the farmer took his hatchet to the farmyard
for the soup’s main ingredient.

But his wife’s sickness continued, so friends and neighbors came to sit
with her around the clock. To feed them, the farmer butchered the pig.

The farmer’s wife did not get well; she died. So many people came for
her funeral, the farmer had the cow slaughtered to provide enough meat
for all of them.

The mouse looked upon it all from his crack in the wall with great sadness.


MORAL
So, the next time you hear someone is facing a problem and think it
doesn’t concern you, remember — when one of us is threatened, we are
all at risk.

Posted in Writing.


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  1. sonam says

    nice one

  2. nomenzone says

    hmm…….appreciable….!!

  3. meraj akhtar says

    lovely piece of work wid a good moral.

  4. john sudhakar says

    [thanx for the moral science class-dear teacher]

  5. Annonymous says

    Very nice……… :) and a great moral !

  6. shobi thomas says

    To me the moral seems like this…. Share ur probs with others, if they dont solve it, they are bound to suffer, not u.

  7. Sahiti Bharadwaj says

    Thats a good moral !

  8. Rajeshnath VT says

    good moral, mini!!! yet we forget these learnings!!

  9. A J says

    Fantastic.. loved it..

  10. Sujoy Mazumdar says

    nice mini

  11. Sudaman TM says

    connection of events to the causes is an art and it is very easy to interpret wrong signals.

  12. KUMAR S says

    MINI - IT WAS A GREAT STORY AND INDEED VERY EDUCATIVE.

  13. thorne says

    Hey.. that was real good. Just by a quirk, I looked up blogs & settled on this.. was worth it… Go on.. spread the gud word.. u have a style.. nurture it

  14. Sandhya Suri says

    excellent - thnx for sharing!

  15. Pooja Nagpal says

    The moral of the story leads us to learn the realities !! good one..

  16. Babu John says

    Quite impressive…good narration

  17. Rahul Daraad says

    bRILLIANT……the conclusion rocks….

  18. Nadimuthu Srinivasan says

    A real good one

  19. Ramchandran Nair says

    written nice, good moral,remind me something from R.Digest when you worry about a problem, 80% people don”t bother and other 20% are happy about it

  20. Swati NitinGupta says

    simple and meaningful

  21. Balu Nair says

    Great moral presented well.

  22. The Princess says

    Cute moral ! Doesnt the remind us that all of us , inspite of living in glass houses , still dare to hurl stones at others houses . Cheers Mini :)

  23. Ginger Bread says

    Awesome!!!

  24. Ramesh Pillai says

    You have a point there…..

    Cheers

  25. Saakshee I says

    Actually Budhoose has a point! but nice story and good moral!

  26. anil g says

    nice picture……

  27. neetha nair says

    nice…

  28. bulbultuk bulbultuk says

    gud one………..

  29. Joseph Antony says

    Hi Mini, would u like to tell me from where u got this?

  30. juhi singh says

    that’’s a good one. actually we are so oblivious of our surroundings and as long as things are not happening to us.

  31. budhoose kanjoose says

    Tthe mouse escaped being eten by the snake. Had the animals removed the mouse trap the snake would have surely eaten the mouse. The mouse should thank all other animals that they did not remove it, though they had to sacrifice their life. but all for the sake of saving the mouse.

  32. Jasir Alavi says

    its been long since i heard a good stry like this :) thnx n keep bloggin..

  33. hariharan iyer says

    nice post mini

  34. bud san says

    true…all that happens around us, may concerns us

  35. Madhavan PK says

    Wow! NIce one.

  36. dilip krishnan says

    these days people are so busy trying to solve their own problems that they don”t have time or the inclination to help out with others” problems. and those who do try to help out, are often taken for granted. it is a paradoxical situation.

  37. amol prabhudesai says

    Its very true, but there is other side to that moral of the story…. we hear someone is facing problem, and try to help them out of problem, they look at us, all the time to rescue them in every problem. Expriences speaks…

  38. raj andipatti says

    nice moral nice story to tell it.

    raj

  39. bulbultuk bulbultuk says

    u r rite…………..