bahut ho chuka ab tera lamba intzaar,
dil ho raha taar-taar,
ajib kash-ma-kash me khada me,
chhu kar bhi tujhe chhu na saku me,
kab tak mujhe tu tadpaiya,
ye yaad rakh le soniye,
tere bina mera dil kahi chain na paayega….
tere bina mera dil kahi chain na paayega….
Sahil ji kya khub likha hai….
Saalo purani pyar ki feelings ko b kuch log aasani se bhul jate hai… Mujko b wo hunar sikha jao kisis din…!!!
Par sach batana agar bhul pana itna aasan hota aur agar aap bhul pate to aaj yu pyar ka dard dil se sidha shabdo me jo utra hai wo hota? Kya aap itne achhe shayar hote?
Ab hame dard me b maza aane laga hai…
Tum na sahi tere dard se gehra nata hai… khyati
hmmmm good one
achhi hai…..
aur haan uss me jo snap lagi hai vo bhi bahut acchi lagi mujhe….
its very beautiful & so romentic….
ok all the best for ur blog writting in our iland.
maine kaha chalo thoda bahut main sabdo se khel do…
too kaise mere sabdo k khel… humm………???
bahut ho chuka ab tera lamba intzaar,
dil ho raha taar-taar,
ajib kash-ma-kash me khada me,
chhu kar bhi tujhe chhu na saku me,
kab tak mujhe tu tadpaiya,
ye yaad rakh le soniye,
tere bina mera dil kahi chain na paayega….
tere bina mera dil kahi chain na paayega….
take care…
sabka dost
rajiv forever
u will never forget me dear….
dost bahut badia…
aur mere yakeen hai ki tujhe bhi mujhe pyaar ho hi jaayega….
marne k baad mujhe chain na milega,
dil tere pyaar me yahi milega,
band kar dekh apni aankhe,
uss me chehra sirf mera deekhega….
kaise sambhaalo apne dil tu hi bta de,
ab tere bina mra bhi na jaayega….
haye ye intzaar ab ho na paayega,
dil tere khayaloon me ab kho na paayega,
badi bechain karti mujhe meri saanse,
ab tera bina jiya na jaayega……
chura lu ya khud doge unn palo ko jo mere siva koi le na paayega,
adhe k saath behra bhi hai mera pyaar ab kisi ki sunn nahi paayega…..
bahut accha leekha hai dost…
vaise tum apne ess blog naam kisi din bhi rakh sakte ho…
nice feelings waqai ye aapne dil se likha hai………………
how can i miss to read such a nice poem oh i forget i was away from iland for 4-5 days !
Hello, Tum Apne Naam ki Takhti hi laga jaao kisi din. Bahut hi badhiya.
Wonderful…..
Hi!!!
Bahut hi sunder Rachna hai ye…………
Dil ko chuu gayi……………………………….
very nice sahilji
bahut khoooooooob
Sahil ji kya khub likha hai….
khyati
Saalo purani pyar ki feelings ko b kuch log aasani se bhul jate hai… Mujko b wo hunar sikha jao kisis din…!!!
Par sach batana agar bhul pana itna aasan hota aur agar aap bhul pate to aaj yu pyar ka dard dil se sidha shabdo me jo utra hai wo hota? Kya aap itne achhe shayar hote?
Ab hame dard me b maza aane laga hai…
Tum na sahi tere dard se gehra nata hai…
sahil bahi…bahut khoob…kya bat hai…all the best
dil ki gaharai se nikala ……bahut hi khub.
wow Sahilji! wonderful………………….
wah-wah wah…………………….. subhanalah. kya likha hai sahil aur pic bhi utni hi sunder……………….wonderful post from u………………
Waah sahil ji, Kya baat hai. Itni gahrai se likha hai. wo nadi lucky hogi jise ye Sahil Milega.
good poetic ruminates….well writen.