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very nice……..and very true for some people…….
badi ajeeb baat hai……….par
aap ne likha bahut achha hai.
magar aap ka blog bahut accha tha…
aagey bhi aise blog leekhte rehna…
aur humey bhi comments deney ka mauka bhi…
dost bas aap k sahaare main bhi ek jawaab dene ki koshish ki magar ye kaya tumhaare baat k jawaab dete maine too shaadi ki baat kar di…
take care haste raho, mushkrate raho,
aur sabhi ko apna dost bnaate raho….
sabka dost
rajiv forever
u will never forget me dear….
par dost naraaz mat hona… agar chahe too aise hi kuch milti-julti lines unn k bhi suna kya pta vo jaldi impress ho jaaye…
sorry yaar main too seriously jawaab de raha tha…
aur last thodi si comedy ho gayi…
par mujhe pta hai tu meri maut ka nazaara dekh nahi paayegi,
aur mere peeche peeche tu bhi uppar chali aayegi,
too qna yahi pe settlement kar lete hai,
tu agar haan kah too abhi shaadi kar lete hai….
sharam se muh chhipaani vaali, kabhi too apna jalwa dikha,
main bhale dur tujhe se, mujhe apni palko me band kar k too deekha,
kasam mujhe teri raho me aa jaaunga, tu na mil saki mujhe agar,
teri yaadon k k saath hi mar jaaunga…
dil ko chho gayi…
yaar lines too bahut acchi hai…
very nice.
Sahil bhai…Bahut khubsurat…KHOOB PARDA HAI KE CHILMAN SE LAGE BAITHE HAIN/SAAF CHUPTE BHI NAHI SAAMNE AATE BHI NAHI…!all the best
USKE PAAS RAHOON AUR ROOTH JAOON, MANZOOR HAI USKO, PAR ROOTH KAR DOOR JAOON, SWEEKAR NAHIN KARTI
HI SAHIL… SO LOVELY YOUR SMALL LOVE STORY…BEAUTIFULLY DEPICTED….THE BEST I LIKE IS DEFINING IN CONTEXT OF A GIRL….LOG MANEGEY NAHI PAR AAJ BHI AISI LADKIYA HOTI HAI JO PYAR BHI KARTI HAI PAR IZHAR BHI NAHI KARTI…WHAT U SAY….
nice
wonderful lines with a beautiful picture……..thanks for sharing.
bahut achchi lines…. antim panktiyan..to lajawab hain…
fantastic…..
wonderful…such beautiful and lyrical poetry…and the last lines are just too good!
saada dil ki iqrar me anokhapan hai na? presentment is definite.
kamal hai yaar…..this is called love…….u love but afraid to express it.
Bahut aachi kavita hai yeh… kaisi vidambana hai is pyaar mein..:-)))
sahil ji. …….. kya kahen , Pyaar ki isse sundar paribhasha kya hogi……
this is what is love.
Bahut khubsoorat soch hai jisko aapne kagaz ke hawale lafzo ki shakl di hai……veryyy sweeettt…….keep going!!
Sahil aapne bahut hi achchhi kavita likhi hai ,,
saadgi bhara prem, niswarth prem….
AGAR US SE DOOOR JAON ME TOU SAANS RUK JAE USKI
OR KOI MAANG LE MUJHE US SE TOU INKAAR BHI NAHI KARTI….
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uske man ka haal to wahi samjhegi Saahil,
aap ye na samjhna ,wo pyaar nahin karti….
main ye kavita bar-bar padhna chahungi….
hamre pas koi shabd ni apke taref mai kuch bhe kahne ko very nice…………
Kya karen yaar, Kuchh ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hain. very good
b”ful ,nice, good………
Sahil jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………. Kya kahu……….
Wo aakhri sher…. bahot khub…. jitni tarif karu kam hogi.
ab kya kahe??? ……..aap cmmnt open bhi rakhte hai aur shabo ko humse cheen bhi lete hai….. bhala hum kaise comment de??? speechless……..
bahut bahut bahut bahut sunder likhha hai aapne ………
Sahil ji! aaj apne apne nam ko sarthak kar diya hai! bahut hi khubsoorat hai ye rechna. Akhiri line wo darwaja khul jane ka intezaar bhi nahi karti……….. bahut hi achhi.
Hello, Aur Wo Darwaja khul jane ka intezaar bhi nahi karti. … Waah
kya baat hai -kya baat hai sahil…………………bahut hi khubsurat …kuchh panktiyaan meri taraf se……………..wo samne jab aaye to nazarein jhuk gai hain haya se …..aur wo door hote hain to thak gai hain raah tak-tak ke………………..beautifulllllllllllllllllllllll.
Very Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!