Raah mein kaante bichein,
par nahi rukta yeh dil,
pair cheel jayein sahi,
par nahi jukta yeh dil|
Ghaav khakaar bhi use,
Aaage badana jo pasand hai|
Raah mein nadiyan milein,
ya mile sagar sahi,
is dil mein hai hosala,
ki par kar jaye vahi|
Doob kar bhi terana
is dil ko jo pasand hai|
Raah mein parvat kayi,
par paar jana hai use,
pair yeh dagamaga rahe,
par dil kahe rukna nahi|
shikharon pe chadkar
badalon ko chumana jo pasand hai|
Khaayi mili geheri badi,
par dil use dekhe nahi,
budhi kahe rukh ja yahin,
par dil uski sune nahi|
paar jaane ke liye, use
pul banana jo pasand hai|
Suraj bhi dhal jaye agar,
andiyara bicha jaye magar,
yeh dil kahe aage bado,
dheirya tum saadhe raho|
dil patanga kya kare,
manjil chirag jo pasand hai|
pyaasa hai tan, bhookha badan,
balheen ho chalaa hai ab,
dil kahe kuch kosa par,
haath failaye hai laksh|
uthate girte bhi use,
girkar uthna jo pasand hai|
Sahas bani, himmat badi,
laksh aage thi khadi,
dil kahe priyatam mere,
ayaa hoon milane main tumhe|
kahane lagaa dil laksh se,
haarakar tere liye,
phir jitana jo pasanda hai|
- Chethna Shenoy
Hi Guys/Gals,
This is poem about our hearts & their craving for what they desire. The desire may be your loved one, your family, your career or even your hobby. To me it is my heart’s ambition to achieve my goals.
- Chethna
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geetesh
gitesh
wow!!, its very nice inspiring poetry……kip it up…………..keeeeeeeeep Smiling………………
kabhi kabhi …mere dil me khayal ata hai ………..
…… ke jaise sab kuch banaya gaya hai mere liye ….
Wow! very inspiring lines……..wonderfully organised…well done chetana!!!
vivek Mysore
Superb expression with the spirit of ambition,
vivek
HI! Chetna,
VERY NICE POEM , DIL SE NIKLI HUI BAAT JISME DAM HAI, KYONKI USE BHI KUCHH KAHNA THA . , GOOOOOOOD …..VERY GOOOD.
IS KAVITA KE ARTH KO BADI ACHHI SAMAJH SE 2 SHABDON MAIN JATA BHI DIYA.
REGARDS,
ARUN
Neve knew you wrote poetry too. My heart goes out to this one’’s sheer spirit. Thanks Chetna.
VL.
The poem into which U have put Ur “Dil”, woh tho achcha he hoga na?
Tumney mera ”Hrudai-parivartan” kar diya!! Its beautiful.
beautifully wri tten…bulbul.bangalore…..
shikharo par badalon ko choomna. Vow. If you have penned it yourself, I hereby give you the status of a great poetess. If otherwise, I must admire your selection. Anyway, it is nice blogging. Pl carry on blogging. Cheers.
Lage raho Chetna ben … laga mujhe ki Mirza Ghalibji phir uthar aaye… mahila ban kar …Kya khoob…
Salaam Namaste
nice and all the best
Beautiful. Doob kar bhi tairna—- what profound thought . It is indeed excellent poetry. Keep it up n be in touch.
hmm….sahi kaha hai bilkul pyar k baare mein…..