1 - Contradictions
I think I know now
a lone tree and silent wind
can’t be together
2 - Request
speak to me, waterfall !
can you hear my soft voice,
as I call out your name?
3 - Conversations
flurries, they speak to
each other, in sylvan tongue
and whitewash our words
4 - Expiation
Tangled web of desires
start to follow the colours of the day.
By then it is too late.
5 - Picture perfect
Consider the clouds:
wafting over the mountains;
blackening the valley
6 - Exploration
a lone traveler
all snow - an evaluation;
clouds his company
7 - Contrasts
Studies in contrast:
the white rabbit with pink ears,
green grass, red flower.
8 - Enervation
dreamy morning scene
so unlike like my cityscape
while I rush to office
9 - Music in the park
swans in a pond
so much colour around
its a symphony
10 - Regret
steps to my heaven
scattered with spoiled steps
unforgiving past
enervation and music i park/ both kaikus are very nice.
absolutely wonderful. no amount of adjectives will suffice for this beauty.
lovely, just lovely….
beautiful. a remarkable sensibility.
So sensitive and ……………………………..
Brilliant. I shall come back for more.
small, and beautiful too….