Chand tanha sham suhani aur ye jheel ka kinara
Kuchh kahe kuchh ankahe fasaana humara
Hum the apne nabi ke gurbat me
Barso se takte rahe aasma ke chand ko
Chand dekh raha tha aaj sath humara
Chehra tha chhupa ghani julffo me
Thehra hua tha paani jheel me
The baithe hum bhi liye jheel ka kinara
Her dil-e-jajbaat usse na sunaya gaya
Gawah tha wo bhi meri mehfil-e-tanhaai ka
Chand ne duuhraaya tha aaj usske samne taraanaa humara
Thehar gaya tha chand bhi jheel ke paani me aaj
Dab-dabai thi aankhe ashq the mere rekhsaar par theharaa
chup tha nabi mera aur ban gaya tha deewaana mera
SARA
Bhahut hi payri rachana he
sooooooooooo romantic
kya baat hai ……..kamaal ki shayari………..bahut khoob …………….”barso takte rahe aasma ke chand ko,,chand dekh raha tha aaj saath humara”…….. just too beautifull line ……….one word……..outstanding….
very beautiful indedd..pic is too good
bahut bahut bahut bahut hiiiiiiiiiiiii
achchha
Bahut khub..bilkul sara ke style ki tarah !!!!!!!!!
nice imagination
wonderful,and wow
Very veri beautiful.
Bahut hi sundar rachna.
Oh, it’’s simply supurb.
its wonderful!thanks for sharing!
nice
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Mind refreshing Post………. so nice of you.
nice one
very beautiful…………. and happy diwali
Ek khoobsoorat daastaan
nice
jheel ke kinare kuchh najar aaya kya…….sara………….
wah!!!!! kya baat hai……….zeel ka kinara aur ham……. bahut hi suunder ehsaas hua iss kavita ko padhte waqt…… hey ur poems are becoming more and more romantic now a days.
bahut sundar rachna…………….jheel ka kinara,thandi hawa aur suhani chandni raat…………………koi bhi rumani ho jaye…….ek geet yaad aa raha hai…””thandi hawa ye chandni suhani …ye mere dil suna koi……kahani…….beautifulllllll dear.
Very lovely sweet poem.
What does NABI and GURBAT mean? Please add the english meaning of difficult urdu or persian words. It will help stupid people like me to understand your poems better.
Ek raat mein do do chaand khile, ek julfon mein ek badli mein,
Apni apni manzil se mile, ek didi ke sangh ek bijli mein ,
O, Jheel jara tu dheere se sun, betaab na ho is manjar mein,
Mera sooraj aaj mila mujhko, kuchh vaqt lagega milne mein.
A very beautiful composition Sara…. thnx for the share
very very nice Sara..u simply take ur thoughts ..beyong words..amazing dear!
Hello,Jheel ke kinare, Chandni me nahai ho voh, Aur uspar se kuch kehna sunana … Vakai Dhadkane Badha dene ke liye kafi hain …. Nice one
Nice poem,n nice pic tooo……$
Hey Sara, very nice kavita.
Aap bahut accha likhati hai, keep it………………Noori
very nice & good post. Have a nice day
hello sara ji,aapki kavita to jheel or chand se bhi sunder hai,aap ase he likhte rahein———-may GOD bless u———–have a nice day————-take care———-tejinder
very well so much touching & loving
Hi!!!!Sara nice pome……chahat aur jaana hai maine bar-bar padna achalagta hai…..
very nice. actually jheel k paani mein chand ki tasweer to bahut hi suhani hoti hai aur jab saath hi saath uspar badlo ka aana-jaan lage rahe tatha chand aur badlo ki athkheliya hoti rahe to mausam mein aur bhi zyada ranginiyan aa jati hai. Chand k liye to sabhi tarashate hain par chand kisi ko naseeb nahin hota. Wo to kisi kisi ko hi bade naseeb se naseeb hota hai.
this is a nice poem jheel ka kinara. and a special feature is this that you have inserted a nice photo related to peoem i am new one on the iland.
Wah sara ji………..bahut khoob……..very nice composing…….”Chand tanha, Sham suhani aur ye jheel ka kinara”…………mind blowing
very romantic……………………………..
one thing dear…….this kind of dark pics r nt gud for health……..dont luv them………….keep again ur will power strong……..heart bright……n write with that confidence again dear frnd………..this one nice too…….keep it up…………..thnx for sharing………..my hertiest wishes……….
very very nice lines written by you. “jheel ka kinara” is very lovely.i wish
u that you will be write these lines……..!
Lovely…just lovely.Can”t find any more words to describe it…
Lovely…just lovely.Can”t find any more words to describe it…
Dil se nikli ye lines - “Her dil-e-jajbaat usse na sunaya gaya ,Gawah tha wo bhi meri mehfil-e-tanhaai ka” bahut hi sunder ban gaye hai. aapko badhai ho. aap aise hi jajbat likhte rahe aur hum usko padkar anandit hote rahe.