Meri dhadkane mujhe yu bechain na kar
Mai tanha thi bahut magar ab aur tanha na kar
Mujhe se yu mere saaye ko duur na kar
Meri tadap meri saanso ko yu majbuur na kar
Samet de mere aanchal ko khushiyo se
Dukho ke samandar se mujhe yu hi duur kar
Taqdeer ne jo bhi dukh diye samete hai humne
Yu meri aankho se mere sapno ko chuur na kar
Pal pal tujhe hi chahu pal pal tujhe hi sochu
Mere Khuda!mere dil ko itna majbuur na kar
Sara-e-basti me aai thi bahar abhi-abhi
Ya rab!bahar-e-basti me khiza ko aabad na kar
Tags: passion
morvellus.
Dukho ke samandar se mujhe yu hi duur kar
Taqdeer ne jo bhi dukh diye samete hai humne
Yu meri aankho se mere sapno ko chuur na kar
pal pal tujhe hi chahu pal pal tujhe hi sochu
Mere Khuda!mere dil ko itna majbuur na kar
The said lines are very nice.
s.k.
most beautiful, touching rachna.
nice.
Meri dhadkane mujhe yu bechain na kar
Mai tanha thi bahut magar ab aur tanha na kar
Mujhe se yu mere saaye ko duur na kar
Meri tadap meri saanso ko yu majbuur na kar
Samet de mere aanchal ko khushiyo se
Dukho ke samandar se mujhe yu hi duur kar
VERY NICE RACHNA, THE SAID LINES ACHCHI LAGI.
S.K.
Meri dhadkane mujhe yu bechain na kar
Mai tanha thi bahut magar ab aur tanha na kar
Mujhe se yu mere saaye ko duur na kar
Meri tadap meri saanso ko yu majbuur na kar
Ati sundar rachna hai, aisi hi karti raho.
Wah khoob.
bahut khub….
Very very nice. It’s cute just like you
Sara, I am going to comment on your post after a long gap…it is just excellent….you are one of the best poetess I ever know but why don’t you write in Devanagari script….I know that no script hurts the talent but but Devanagari can decorate it in some different way and most of people will like it more….
It is my suggestion only but I like your signature in every dress….
thanks a lot for your beautiful expression of emotions…take care
bahar me kho gaya tha main aapke shayari padkar
bahar me kho gaya tha main aapke shayari padkar
good one
nice post sara.keep it up.
nice post very touchable
nice…aap to hamesha hi accha likhti hai salo se dekha he . sara ji lagta he aajkal aap hamse naraz hai tabhi hamare purane comments par koi pratikriyaye aapne nahee de na he facebook ki friend request ko accept keya..
beautifullllllllllllllllllll
What a wonderfull imagination.
Sara G, keep writting.
I’ll also come back to writting BLOGS as soon as possible.
“Aap ke Dil ki tamnna Puri hohi…”
you may get what you want.
bahut hi sundar aapne bahut hi achchha lika hai
keep it up
Wahi baat wahi jazba wahi andaaz-e-bayan. Illness kept me away and I could not read your posts. I am trying to come back
NICE
Nice One
I m loving it sara…
nice one…
sara o sara all your blogs r cute and really amazing
its amazing wow
very nicely expressed…..
hi.. sara di how r u?
another a sweet script
SARA i am your fan, realy
nice..
brilliant..Sara-e-basti mei hur waqt chhaayi rahe bahaar……bus tumhaare kalam jo chhed de koi taar
Really great.
Aapki shayri to hamesha se bemisal hai Sara didi. Thank you didi.
very nice
My God……………U write so emotionally…………….superb
this is really an awesom poetry
Really Wonderfule……
Sara bahut din baad tumari sundar rachna ko padna mauka mila hai. Atyant komal avam dil ko chhu lene wale bhavo mein rachi ye tumari rachna bahut hi khubsurat hai.
Sara..very nice.
Touching,sweet,full of fragrance…Thank you for sweet sharing….I liked it.
Meri Koshishen mujhe yu nakam na kar,
Aagaz hai abhi se mere hauslon ko tabah na kar ————— Wah wah…. bahot hi achchhi shayari likhi hai aapne………..
Brilliant peice Sara. I would prefer this love of pal pal chahana aur sochna only to be for God. Insaano se toh khoob hi humne mohabbat; ab Khuda se kar lenge ishk kyunki yakeen hai ke yeh ishk nakaam na hoga.
Keep it going.
good one sara……
vah bahut sundar……………….
Kabile tarif
Behad khubsurat .Thanx fr sharing
hmm bahut khuub……yun meri aankhon se mere sapane chuuraya na kar………. i liked it.
most wonderful!!!
“You live in the depth of my heart”