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UN TOLD LOVE..

November 24, 2009 By: Category: Writing


I was a stranger when I met her first

I was a stranger when I hold her from falling

I was a stranger when I asked her name

I was a stranger when I wished her good luck for exams

I was a stranger when I went with her and rest of the friends to a movie

I was a stranger when she asked can we be friends

I was just a friend when she gifted me a dancing girl doll for my birthday

I was just a friend when she sent my inbox full of messages

I was just a friend when she introduced me to her brother as friend

I was just a friend when she said I am a special friend from all

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One day she came to me and said.

She is going to get married soon.

She will always remember me in her life.

These are the memorable days she spent in her life so happily.

Miss you my special friend.

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I felt to cry I dont know why did I loved her

I was stranger again

Most of us face such situation in life


21 Comments to “UN TOLD LOVE..”


  1. Surendra Channur says:

    it’s good

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  2. aditi says:

    lovely,heart touching.i missed my such time.beautiful.

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  3. very nice post dear

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  4. I like the style of your expression…but that was merely a physical attraction born through the eyes…love that is untold is nothing but your affection… one can not live in dreams….

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  5. Cju C says:

    Its not necessary that every relation should end up as love / married life. If it would have been so…then wat about the beautiful relationship called “FRIENDSHIP”

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  6. Inder M VIG. says:

    thats so realistic….

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  7. SARA says:

    Very beautifully write up……

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  8. vaidehi says:

    amzin 1 murali….jst speechless…. :)

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  9. A thought provoking one!

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  10. Deepak says:

    Good one Murali….

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  11. SARA says:

    Very beautifully write-up………………If you love some one better try to tell them…

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  12. Friendship and love are two separate things …….never mistake friendship for love …..if you do love, then have the courage to say so …..wish you all the best, Murali.

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  13. manavchak says:

    very heart touching……………Do”nt worry
    i pray to god create a beautiful scrieft for my friend……….
    always keep smileing…………..

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  14. Shelly says:

    :( :”( Ohhhh !!!!!very sad, & touchy one

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  15. arya aperna says:

    very heart touching post…but i think now it is too late,,,, kash u realized earlier..kyo nahi samajh paye aap unki aur apni feelings ko,, kuch rishte sirf baat na karne ki wajh se tute jate hai, ,,,,,,,,,,good luck for future..

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  16. mohd ansari says:

    dil ko chu lene wale lines,its wonderful,aage kuchkeh nahi sakta

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  17. Skiyajudeen says:

    :-( such is life….so..we must try our best to bear all….

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  18. Bo says:

    can”t agree more. when love passes you, you should hold it tightly otherwise it would just pass you by and be gone forever. good luck in love.

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  19. ivee nia says:

    do not try to swim - you will drown - - - JUST DO IT - (Nike) :) you will be 50 % right ALWAYS :) so telling - i made that lots of times and failed - when being a teenager - but it is good to know where you stand - :) Thank you for this - it is very very insightful :)

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  20. Anil khare says:

    Very nice write up……we should have courage to tell our feelings of love…..
    pyaar karte ho tou keh do naa…..nahi tou der ho jaayegi……

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  21. tusher ghosh says:

    nice one………..

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