Friends' Update
-
Loading ...Please wait..
The Sunday Paper
Posted in Fantasy.
– September 2, 2007
13 Responses
Stay in touch with the conversation, subscribe to the RSS feed for comments on this post.
Subscribe
pavementfreud’s blog
Broadcasting my thoughts
Categories:
huh??? mala marathi yet nahi…. dats all i knw!!!
Agha…..marathi mein kyon likhaa aapne ??
tata!….pan laukar ye parat…
Ya know, the story was a good one in that it does not fail to entertain. The narration is good and it is a good read, but to me, it falls short of making sense…I means… your whole story is good…but it rests on that one line in the end, and methinks that there isnt enough stuff in the story to qualify that line… And thus because that line isnt qualified, the story too, isnt - acording to me that is - someone else could have a diff. standpoint, of course! But otherwise, I liked the style of narration and the lang. employed which entertains!
Agreed- ha tool fannaat aahe, PF bhai. Tu tuza editing kadhi sampavnar aahes?
आता काय? आपण लीहीणार आहे का पुढे?
where is the post..i m not able to read it…..
finally somthng frm u& a nc one! but the end!!!!!!!! leaves a lot unspoken……phir kya hua aage?
A treat to read as always!! Loved teh way you started and then… finally signed off… leaving an entire world of possibilities for the reader to explore!!
good one……didn”t get a few parsi words there but still enjoyed it
wow! a good insight in to the parsi community and the morphosis , no the wrong word rather, the supressed emotions of a father shown so subtly and beautifully…….
It has all together- story, life, humor and love of difference!! Nice to read u again PF!
as usual, ur narration is excellent. I liked the idea of “beingfather for a day!!” the characters are described so well and not too well to douse all couriosity. Always enjoyed reading ur stories