To take the first step
To learn the first word
To unlatch a cage
And free a lovebird
To scrape an elbow
To stumble and fall
To drool in deep slumber
To see a waterfall
To hide behind a tree
To watch a shooting star
To feed a hungry kitten
To lick clean a jelly jar
To discover the hidden ego
To nurse a broken heart
To try and climb with balance
First time on a horse cart
To fall in love
In hope of nothing to gain
There's always a first time
And then another again
realy nice poem, visit my iland n read my poem
yea there is always a first time…what about making friends with a stranger..i bet you havent done that before
What’’s this? A interesting front for a third party to start an eternal debate. To me Spirituality is too theoritical in it’’s present state in India. Where are the souls like Vivekananda, Subhash Chandra Bose and the likes now a days… they r no where to be found. So why we unnecesssarily brag about our spirituality…I feel sorry for Sharmishthaa…her beautiful poem with it’’s underlying meaning has been sidetracked by some selfish chauvinistic people.
Mr. Rajivlochan Das, you win. We are not even on the same battlefield @Mishti, I apologise for the intrusions.
Thank you for your reply.Unfortunately you donot have the Idea of Spiritual Science.India is great because of the Spirituality.It can empower the insight which is lacking in every one of us .We are too busy to think about the Skin and the skeleton.There is no scarecity of food and all kinds of comfortability.We are lacking the main ingredient of the human feature ,hat is ignorance of our constitutional position.We are simply wasting our time to amnage the daily Bread.Mother nature becomes pleased while we are controlled.the Spiritual Science can teach us how to control the senses.That is why we are living just like animals.There is no humanity because of our indifference of Santan Dharma.There is no great man or great woman. Only unchaste and cowerdice is prevalent and dominating the socalled culture in the name of civilization.Donot forget that you are always being controlled by the nature.Mother Nature can profusely supply for our daily needs.
@rajivlochan das
is this it? Is to highlight the value of spirituality the only job of Indians? why does being born in India make us so special? Then why are we so behind? If we are the sole keepers of the Ultimate truth, then why is there a lie at every corner? What about humanity and honesty? spirituality and its preachers these days are only a bunch of hippocratic BS.
I think this post is plenty real. If you can decipher the metaphors, paragraph four isint half bad.
Try to write on some reality.Material thought are just for some conditions and it is like a dream(Ephimeral).To be born in INDIA ,we should try to highlight the value of Spirituality,the Ultimate truth of the living being.All the Best.
can we ever fall in love without it being self-less? I dont think it is humanly possible. Isint love selfish? These are not rhetorical questions. Just plain questions.
Nice poem and last four lines are really true……
aameen