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The New you!

Unsolicited does it knock

Appears fleetingly initially

Engulfs all over slowly

Fills in  the heart

Encompassing body, mind and soul

Laying a seige on the whole

Enveloping each and every moment

Sneaking into every part

Surreal and sublimely

It wins over you truimphantly

There you lay totally swept off

It is not you but the New You!

 

Posted in Poetry.



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  1. TheMind Speaks says

    The lines brought into me a certain sense of tranquility. Achieved and a rejoiced feeling! Though the same lines would do good when Love would get into one capturing all it can and totally sweep one of their feet. So till the end I actually thought it was about Love conquering all senses ;)

    Nevertheless like I said tranquility flowed within me! Cheers to u :)

  2. Shiny Vikas says

    brings lots of positive vibes……

  3. Shivaja says

    The new you….sneaking in gently!

  4. ranjit singh says

    It seems your higher self is inspiring you to take lead for upliftment in life…very nice feelings…expressed quite smoothly…congrats Tamilini.

  5. HariOm Chawla says

    Beautiful perception, Tamillini …. wish you moe and more such blishful moments.