Life Unplugged—-
Is An Unfinished Tale
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Of sunny days
Misty nights
Awesome depths
Heady heights
Magical horizons
Dark or bright
The rushing wind
The gushing flow
The surging tides
The highs, the lows
An unseen voyage
An unknown port
Dreams lead on
And paths unfold
The will unchained
The soul on fire
The spirit free and
Full of desire
"Reach out"— they cry,
"To the call of the wild .
For life was born to be
Destiny's child !"
#1 by rajeshkumar rai
loved it again…becoming your fan! a cool pankha!
#2 by Tariq sayed
beautiful,,, like ur eyes… :))))
#3 by DM
Hey, Nice one pal….instantly set me crooning….worth putting to tune
#4 by Gopi Goswami
Smooth flow of mystical, magical and spirited words…nice poetry
#5 by ShivendraMohan Singh
wonderful…
#6 by prasad
Very nice and touching, nice to see something different this time….
#7 by ANKIT SRIVASTAVA
So Musical and consequently so true! THX
#8 by RUDRA
the effect is subtle.
#9 by Nadeem Jairajpuri
Very Beautiful & touchy piece
#10 by anamika r
Wow… kya baat hai dear….sweet & simple…but very touchy…
#11 by Sharath gowda
nice poem,lifes extremes and the unconquerable will,we should all learn to be level headed and equanimous through the highs and the lows.and meet with ou triumphs and disasters and treat them the same (Kipling)
#12 by febin joy
wow… good going…
#13 by rajeshkumar ram
Hi Sarita…….just few lines…but packed with so many thoughts full of grand pictures…congratulations for the great post!
#14 by Shreya Tiwari
bahut achchha likha hai Sarita….keep it up.
#15 by rakesh tiwari
wah Sarita kya baat hai kya khoob likha
#16 by sharmila m
d will unchained d soul on fire…….datz gr8.
#17 by Ume sh
wonderful……….of different times!
#18 by sheikh rahman
very nice…kepp it up..
#19 by Pinaki Pandit
every word brings in a diffrent emotion……of places and memories…. very nice……
#20 by Think Tank
So many feelings and emotions threaded in one poem… Of course a soulful one, and very thoughtful… In a diff style from your previous ones, though the soul on fire reminds me of a funny incident
Keep writing… (Rahul)
#21 by rahul
very expressive liked it
#22 by Dilip
An unseen voyage
An unknown port
Dreams lead on
And paths unfold…
Yes, this is perhaps being destiny’’s child..?? This is beautiful compose!
#23 by bubblymasti
be- you - tea- full ( 4 cups, with extra sugar). I share these feelings many a times.
#24 by sanat ray
….yet the attunement to the thought is simply superb.
#25 by Tarun Singh
Hmmmm …
#26 by PGR NAIR
May you reach what you cannot..liked the pace…PGR
#27 by Srinivasan Parthasarathy
Very crisp description of life.
#28 by ranjit singh
What a great composition!So simple and divine.Congrats Sarita for this expression of the inner self.
#29 by deby gene
very beautiful poetry…..there’’s poetry not only in the words…but in the flow of thoughts as well…..
#30 by sanat ray
brilliant.
yet something is missing.
may be there are few deliberate choice of words to assign
desired effect.
#31 by Dr Rajeev
“Soul on fire, spirit free”_____ yet again a good creation Sarita. Keep it up.
#32 by keshav singhal
Sarita’’s iLand, a nice site …. Nice post … With best wishes.
#33 by tanuj neogi
“Human beings are born free, but everywhere they are chained”. Beautifully expressed. A good one indeed!
#34 by hina sharma
beautiful poem, loved the 2 lines magical horizon dark or bright
#35 by seema n
nice poem yaar
#36 by Pradeep
nice post sarita……… a quote worth mentioning in the context “The tragedy of life is not that it ends so soon, but that we wait so long to begin it”……keep going
#37 by sidhartha kukreja
woooooooooooooooooow , amazing ,
#38 by AAMEEN KHAN
Unseen voyage, unknown port……. and just rowing boat to unknown place…..isnt it? beautiful imagination.
#39 by Nandita Prabhu
Wonderful poem Sarita. Thank you for sharing
#40 by Basant Pandey
wonderful poem sarita.
#41 by chandrakant parmar
wonderful . life was born to be destniy’’s child
#42 by chandrakant parmar
wonderful . life was born to be destniy’’s child
#43 by Anonymous Poet
loved that second para buddy! simply so positive and striking! the life goes on and it is bound yet free! loved this one as well
#44 by Barun Giri
wonderful………………..
#45 by Snehal
wonderful and remarkable statment about life…..
#46 by p k
so true of life…it was born to be free…to take its own course like a river…but the dams of hurdle created by modern day ways of living…have set its agenda…and yet it is yearning to break free from shackles….beautiful composition dear.