Sealed With A Kiss
Throbbing hearts
Trembling hands
Long breaths
Fumbling words
Words mean 'Nothing'
When silence speaks wonders!
Moon-lit sky
Starry nights
Time becomes 'Idle'
Emotions galore
Horses' gallop
In my endless dreams!
Dreamy eyes
Wet lips
Flickering lights
Silence prevails
Only hearts beat
When bodies go ablaze
With just a tender touch!
Music plays
Tapping feet
After a hard day's work
You reach for a bottle of wine
Strawberries to complement
Priceless moments;
Just 'You' & 'Me'
In the arms of each other…
'Sealed With A Kiss'
Note: This is no poem. I have simply given wings to my titillating thoughts in the form of words!!!
Simply Superb !!!Absolutely no words to express …All of us are Just Simply Stunned By the Vivid portrayal of the Moment… Most famous Movie directors and Writers say it is very difficult to catch the ”RIGHT” moment… well… as i see it… you have been able to do that from the first word till the last…
Aapke Gulabi Aankhe Kuch To Bole ………, Haat Me Liye Jaam, Jisme Aapka Dil To Doley ………….., Ek pal Ki Duri, Uus Pyar ka Jhil Ko Chhune…………., Lahar uthi hay Jisam Me Teri, Jo Uski Hotho Me Hoth Miilaii Hay Tune.
yup… but aint all poems children of thoughts n fancies
lovely…
Yup ….it was one yummy passionate kiss babay ;- )
Words selected and woven so skillfully.Poem or whatever…its just great!!!Reader’’s block over.
wow…thoughts woven in to words so well…romantic
the thoughts sure are titillating but very nicely put across
wordz did speak wat they meant…
Amazing thoughts……
….exiting fire of passions… reminds me of Khajurao sculptures…so realistic….
Diwakar, that is one lovely song, isn”t it? What about “zindagi bhar nahi bhoolenge woh barsaat ki raat…” What poetry in those lines which goes…”Haai woh reshmi zulfon se tapakta pani…phool si gaalon pe rukne ko tarasta pani..” Haai!!
Very romantic:-)
wow……but who will handle this excitement now :)))
Hmmm…niiice
beautiful as always
U seem to be a hardcore romantic aint ya Renu…? Good for ya!
”A kiss from the Rose” so said seal, with the night as described by u and with ur loved one by the side..hmmmmwhat else can one ask for??
Keep Dreamin…Keep Writin…..
Very good. By reading I remember those lines of Mere Mehboob,”Yaad hai mujhko meri umra ki pahali wo ghadi Jab tere Marmari hathon ko chhua tha maine…” You write poems with heart …Keep it up.
Hi Renu,
One always feels gud reading your work . Passion / emotions flow from your tpenand get embedded on the readers mind forever. Waiting for more . Regards
whoa…..fiery passions!!….your thoghts are really scary..:)…
i am missing my someone special very badly….:((
but hey ! nice feelings expressed through wonderfull words…
Tender,titilacious and a bit of fun with your pen…that’’s what this poem is…enjoyed it!
hmmmmmmmm……flying throuigh romantic transe?……carry on………….
titillating eh? lemme elaborate, perhaps the words are- mushy, tasty, yummy? see Renu, anything that is sealed with a kiss goes beyond what the mind can grasp. ur attempt at describing the “beyondness” is nice. cheers! ;0)
hmmm….wine makes you intoxicating and the strawberries give tempo to pink mood…xxzztreme moods…
Renu your titillating thoughts have indeed got wings….it has passion in it…keep it up..
simply natural …. feeling of wanting!!!
that was so beautiful and romantic……..a relationship sealed with a kiss is bound to last looooooooooong…………
amazingly written…the best poem comes out in form of unintentional thoughts, u write it in paper and it becomes a poem. You pen down your thoughts really well. keep writing!
Renu ! What an expression !!!…….. it’’s such a incredible post and one can feel the depth and feelings reflected here………just wondering abt the lucky guy who felt the kiss
…………….One of your best creation……
Why was wine nicessary???
Very good one… and before that, nice thougts… 
(Rahul)
Hmm..ever wondered why don”t men think like this? Nice ”thoughts” Renu
what awesonme thoughts!! :-))… u should write a story along these lines
muhh. so hot n sizzling.. u r a real romantic person
Wow..what a sizzler….:)
tempting thoughts…good lines
It is a poem indeed……Very good one…….
Straight from the tip of your pen to depth of our hearts…..
sizzling! felt the kiss!
this is very hard to write on this topic, i have tried and write in my blog ..but you realy present a wonderful expression…endless dreams and priceless moment is appearing you poem.
my heart is smiling…..carry on
nice post
“This is no poem. I have simply given wings to my titillating thoughts in the form of words!!!” RA, you reached your goal smoothly and with a fine touch! Its simply superb!
You have described longing for companionship in such perfect words… you may not have written a poetry but there is poetry in those expressions… conveyed so perfectly…. incidentally i have bottle of wine….you bring the strawberries …;-)
so delighting
i liked
beautifully romantic.
i think the people finding each other again was rather unwarranted…..don”t publish it…..will come back to comment again….
throbbing hearts, trembling hands, beautiful words, this may not be a poetry of sorts rather as you told giving shape to your feeling….in a land of misinterpretations and complications this is your bro saying….when people actually like each other, when they are born again…they actually find each other all over again….with no misinterpretation….your bro…..the piece is quite romantic…star lit skies, horses gallop….etc.
wow - it really flows and the seal at the end - would be priceless wouldn”t it? No seal like when two pairs of lips meet. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice :))))
really titillating words……very well expressed…”when bodies go ablaze with just a tender touch”…. tenderness in love…… a fact which is lost between the couples in today’’s fast moving world. Words mean nothing when tenderness is there.