"Sshhh" .Not Another Word!!!!!!
Pent up emotions ?
Tear-filled eyes ?
Is this a good time ?
For 'Us' to speak & sort this out ?
"Some Other Time" .is this what you have got to say???
Cold stares !
Disconcerting glares !
What are we waiting for ?
"Can we talk now?"
"Leave me alone, will you?" .is this what I am going to hear again???
Tensed atmosphere !
A lump in the throat ?
Where is this going to lead ?
"Are we done with each other?"
"Will you get the hell out of here?" isn't this the next one coming from you???
I muster the courage !
Ready for a confrontation ?
Our eyes meet hesitantly; not once but twice !
Going is beginning to get lot tougher now !
'Should I' or 'Will you' 'start'?
You pull me close to you, apologetically;
I find myself in your arms !
Do I hear you whisper into my ears now?
"Baby, I…Hmm .Err ”
“SssHhh”…”Not another word” is all I have got to say to you JJJJ
Lovingly yours,
RA
Uhmm…so a hug can hush a clash…need to try….PGR
that sounds nice
truly 
wow…spellbound…from coldstares to those whispers in ears…loved it
jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj sounds great!
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!superb hai
ह्म्म्म क्या कविता है! क्या कल्पना है!
a very cute poem…..and about a very sweet moment!!!!!!!!!!
nice!!!!!!!
gr8 going!!!!!!!!!
SO SWEET & HIDDEN WORDS TEACHES THE GREAT FEELINGS….
Superb Renu……
beautiful one
yeah, not uttering a word is so comforting so many times..
hi renu - i heard this happens most of d time wid a young married couple, experience eh? - ha ha - rock
Nice good post
Relationships breaking up like dry twigs is like a very common things now-a-days..and that too over very petty issues……The only thing that binds two completely different individuals together through sickness and hardship etc… is LOVE…. every other feeling is just a manifestation of the love that one feels for the other….YOue are right renu!!!…SHHHhhh there should be LESS talking and MORE loving for relations to survive
good one :-)… but i guess u didnt want me to tellu that after 39 comments
I love this one
I think you will never change hahahaha
Nice to see you again, back on the iland, charming and bubbly, chatty and colorful, sssshhhhh 
All this for your blog 
(Rahul)
a nice one renu……
Nice poem! Sure liked it!
moments… and it is those rare moments that can make or break ….how often we fail to move from a cold stare to an apologetic embrace..and lose everything that we dearly want…
loved this one renu… good going..
Sweet
oh how sooooo romantik-O delicious-O …….mast poem hai ..>!!!
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shhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!….well who whould want to talk in such cosy moments anyway
Hi Renu,
A very well expressed / articulated work . At times actions apeak louder than words. Regards
Excellent…..Silence conveys everything better than a thousand words……So….Not another word…….
hey you put up a post titled ssssssssssssh………not another word…….so how can you expect me to break it and speak out…..hence the silent visit as u wished.
Jokes apart…….it was well expressed feelings of a person who feels she is on the brink of seeing her relationship going bust, but saved (is it for the present??) by a sudden change of heart of her lover who takes her into his arms and she silences him from saying anything…..but as sunshine said…..whether the decision has been postponed to the future??? it would have been better if she just went ahead - expressed her fears to him and then decided whether to continue moving ahead without him or be with him…..should have been more strong willed instead of raising a question and then thinking of the expected answer by herself.
lovely, simply beautiful! I love the ways you tune the words to sing your song and speak your mind! wonderful it is! thanks for your comment on “neelami ki mehfil” cheers keep speaking your heart out!
each words echos towards ECSTASY - AGAR AAP KEE LEEKHAWAT HEI AAPKEE ZINDGEE HAI TOH SAHEEMANAI MEI AAP AAPHEE HAI AAP JAISHAI KOI NAHEE HOSKAKTA- good luck
Sshhhhhh……how true…..we take the things to hell and wont say that one word!! and whenever it comes it makes us forget all the crap from past
beautifully written…….i luvd it
Sssshhhh..Im quite speechlss with ur dexterity with emotions, capacity to think and imagine these…wow! Dont ever stop imaging pal…..Dont ever come out of that world!!
Keep writing!
Renu ! It’’s simply mindblowing……..ur verses are always perfect…..but here emotion at its peak……..” Look into my eyes…….gimme a hug…..lets reconcile all odds in life…….take me to ur bosom……..”……….RAJ MISHRA
good post, keep it up.
very nice Renuji…
Keep it up…!
hahaha… either one of them have to give up, it always a wonder, who did the first move ….ur poems r like, u r really making a big problem seems to be a like simple one to solve, may be it is …. :Di loved ur poems!
nice ….
aha..surrender…..shikaar khud yahaa shikar ho gaya!
thts really a beautiful one
Renu that was really few with a huge energy of words…
Wow!!
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm………
some poet’’s imagination u got here… hush… i”m not suppose to say too much am i? :p
Another confrontation avoided…. the problem postponed…by a hug. Is this how we go on living???? Which is better - the confrontation or agitated words? Wonder whether life’’s so easy? Great Poem Renu. A lot of emotions conveyed in a few words.
nice words indeed ……keep sharing
all yours….a truth…the question always is who will make first move?… more we think more the distance occurs… very well written …
ahhhh there are times when words are just not needed - niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice - take care :))))))))))))))
Renu what can I say? I”m lost for words….. So beautifully expressed.Its like replaying moments in life WOW……..
Renu what can I say? I”m lost for words….. So beautifully expressed.Its like replaying moments in life WOW……..
Now I can draw up a sketch of a scene unknown to me… nice, beautifully composed.
Three things in life that, once gone, never come back -
(1)- Time
(2)- Embeded Words
(3)- Opportunity
WOW….is all i can say…i have a paucity of words when it comes to perfect verse…:)
…quite understanding … hope everybody is like u…