Soul Curry
Thirsty Souls surface every night
From chaotic reminiscence
Shedding mucky clothes of charade
Embarking on alluring delusions
Of finding another soul as deficient as MINE!
I am no different from you
As I await the moment too; every dark night
To discard my robe of façade & unmask my charred demeanor
To be 'One' with your divine SOUL!
So here I am
Waiting for 'You'
To disrobe me, quench my thirst
And set my tormented soul free!
For I see, no 'tomorrow'
In this forbidden land of "uninterrupted" ECSTASY!
As I take an oath, to remain,
Brazen beyond words
Naked beyond nudity
And lustful beyond greed
Only for 'You'
Tonight & every single night to COME!!!
Soulfully Yours
RA
P.S. I leave you with yet another poem written by one of my iLander friends, after seeking due permission to publish the same on my blog page.
I bet you will relish this one, as much as I did!!!!
I find her in a nano second…
Every second!
On the middle of the highway of my senses
A century ago!
I met an Earthling, so known to my soul by her intensity
Rational too!
Death was destined, open and routine for me then
She made me sense how such a small flutter of her eye can create waves
As if it's a spiritual continuity from another galaxy
How our screams can mingle with cosmic intensity of our silent souls…
Just her little thought made my death worth though surprisingly secret!
Her senses are the map of my well-planned death row!
No gas, no wheels even, just orchestrated known tune of a full blown poem.
Such persistence, such stamina…
Yet she leaves me void
In spite of million of nautical miles between our hearts.
"Hey, my earthling"
"You think you know it all?"
You say intensity is just chemistry of hormones
You implore me to give up my outbursts
My eruption!
You discomfort me in my severe serenity
Hey earthling. Let me shed my shield… I engulf you
I promise you ‘LUST” that is shameless yet “eternal” for us!!!
SUCH A NICE POST
amazinggggg…Really enjoyed it……………….
… deep…. passionate….and amazingly beautiful!!!
hi renu… that was typical of you …to give a sense of normalcy to an abstract yearning.. loved your unique expressions as usual …truly intense…
It is really great………
Hmmm…Intense. Good one!
good one
gr8…………..
nude beyond nudity! omg! that said it! killed me!
the soul curry is beautifuland i empathise…loved the anon poet too…seems to be in perfect sync…..lovely
excellent….
nice one & very intense !!!!
That was very intense…… Lovely
This kind of poems can only be created by you…. with your amazing verses they are completely expressed……..wonderful writing skill…..isn”t it??? …..keep up the good work……….RAJ
Hi Renu,
Your poems always relect deep set / intense emotions. One always yearns for more, after reading your work . Regards
wonderful spicy soul curry
soul curry…wonderful post, intesne feelings
very intense !!!!
This poem is in the similar vein as the poems of an ilander ”Savi” (don”t know where she is now) whose poems I used to read earlier. Well, since you have added enough spices in the curry, I am sure ilanders will savor it well:)…….PGR
Wow that was some journey..when i thought i had experienced it all by your lines, you top it with that tsunami of a poem from your friend…like i said before, what a journey…..
bah ! my mouth n eyes are wide open …kudos to that ANonyms ilander …..can anyone even think n inscript that beautifully ! :O …..
Intense and passionate yearnings !!
wow……passionate feelings expressed in style! fantastic….
nice lovly lusty love………..eternal .emotional……..no words ………………….very …………………
wonderfully expressed, with intesne feelings and passionate images finding new meanings…
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acchaa hai…
mood builder, lolz… jokes apart, interesting post..keep rocking..
The true desire…the true need………..and also tooo bold isnt it? U presented true emotions with most beautiful words….wonderful
Bold statements
These are shockingly good for the soul…like a jolt of electricity they read
renu its a great post………. your flowing way of writing is superb.keep it up dear…….
Renoooooooo !!!! There you are with another GEM …seeping into each and every cell of our souls… which have in time become te anthem of our lives…Definitely a cut above the rest… and you are a” Pearl “yourself…
Renu, this is great! the line ”finding a soul as deficient as mine” is a stand-out.. i think the poem that u featured from an anonymous ilander is familiar to me, have read it somewhere… anyway, i await ur next post! :)))
the way u expressed is very nice..u r really a good poetess who can write any emotions or situations into a poem
Too good……..aapki post ne humari bhi soul ko bade dheeme se chua .. keep sharing
Beautiful poem!!!
Delicious….
…it is beautyfully written.. this ectasy is an addiction… may not last forever… as it is said i do not think abt tomorrow..and enjoy the moments..
Tormented soul free…??Hmmmm wonder how one does that..??
Keep writing!
Brazen beyond words
Naked beyond nudity
And lustful beyond greed
… Words with a perfect tone …
Well, in general I don”t enjoy the tone in which such poems are written, because plainly saying I am not comfortable with such environments and the ”air” that these insulate. Earlier I used to get scared by these, and I know many of our iland friends write such poems, but now it is fine. But I know these poems are wonderfully expressed, just I dont get to go on the same plane to enjoy those. Life for me is doscovery in innocence, a mystery which we can paint like kids, a duck here, a rabbit there, a cloud here, a sun there. Relationships, deep feelings, etc are good things, but mostly to feel and hardly to express. Life is simple and lovely… Anyways, liked your poem more
Keep writing… and dont misunderstand me please
(Rahul)
wonderful! simply wonderful! lusty and lucrative words! amazingly portrayed and beautifully weaved! yeah a soul curry indeed! keep writing
Soul on fire!
I have no dictionary, no words ! How can I praise this superb creation! RA, I am just sold!
Very good one indeed!…….
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brazen beyond words??naked beyond nudity??? whats got into this soul??? lustful … but truthful. WOW!!!