Virtual Impressions!
Buried in dust & grime
Are my poems
Lifeless & inconspicuous!
The poet in me has been brutally murdered
And so are my words; choked to death
Reminiscence of yester years have all turned sour!
There was a time; they were earnestly appreciated by all
But now you hear them shout from roof-tops
Seeking attention!?!?
Yet another futile attempt, I make today
To search for words;
That long betrayed me!
For a messiah; born during my poetic pursuit
Very virgin, very virile
Lucid in every subtle way!
Floating images, static sights
Defining life in vociferous light
I see my today in the dawn of tomorrow
In deep slumbers of the night!
Tranquil moments; perishing thoughts
Livid memories in placid bouts
I see you coming to my rescue
Before I elapse as unfinished verses!
Love
RA
Welcome back, but where have U gone again?
nice …………..khubsurat abhivyakti
Well written verses, melancholic…….Your poems are always full of life Renu
It happens to the best of them but then you have to persist to overcome it…keep at it…good expressions
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very nice poem
Oh what a tangled web we weave … Definitely feeling this one..
Very captivating words. Wow. Gosh, for once I am truly speechless and in awe, left feeling whatever it was you were feeling when you wrote this piece.
your words find wings here and soar high, despite the agony and the angst which echo throughout…
very nice poem
Didn”t know that you are back. You may feel wingless but your words still are like the wings of albatross, sprawling and serene. Today always runs on the edge of tomorrow and we often raise toast to a tomorrow that doesn”t exist…Understand your feelings…Do write more…PGR
Your poems are always very different, expressive. I guess lot many people goes through such piercing phase at some point or other in life… at least I have gone thru this many times.. but how many can express it like this… and then I think how painful it would be for them who would not be able even to express it…..like i heard somewhere “Every thing shall pass away”….hope this phase will also go……excellent verses Renu…….Welcome back…….Regards..Raj MISHRA
Ahaaaaa……a beautifull Poem from RA!!! She has the touch!!!
How are you by the way?
Long time no see!!!
moe m has said it all,like a ballerina graceful her lines she writes……i myself has been short of words…..the kid in you….i pray will live on….the poem….is good as always…..its sad everyone has go through phases but its just a phase…its just a delusion…the soul of a poet…will live on…..
ahh Renu, ”tis been a long time… and i missed this for long days, welcome back! it’’s time you grace this struggling site once more with your verses…. keep ”em coming
so renu… u too???????
life at times takes away the very essence from us..doesn”t it?…
gud comeback
Welcome back.. the break u took is very long.. but once again u came into it.. everything will be in flow again
RA…the Renu Ayyar…the poetess is back…welcome…welcome….”longing to see your poetic skills, the light that you seek is inside, within you, the sprout of infinite lights….”… great to see you back……Raghu Iyer
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Nice one!
ms.RA - long time no see!!!??? this one’’s dull and depressed - why not try prose for a change. But good to see u in action. love
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renu, am glad to see ur poems once again after long…. u know very well the words cannot die even if our mortal coils perish… it is eternal… and u r ur own master and why u need someone to rescue u??? thanx for sharing once again… keep writing…
guess what……………welcome back reins………..was away from the iland for long, just checked my mail today……………….and wow!thanks!
very good!!! After a long gap!
hey welcome dear!!! Its really nice to see u back!!! “virtual impressions”…. life is a wheel … it moves on … and we need to follow the same…