Neither the blue sky, nor this beautiful world,
It was u who took my heart away,
When my whole world way grey.
U gave me everything,
And a little bit more………just a little bit more.
And when it’s colder times,U lay by my side.
U became the meaning of my life.
Hold me in ur hand,I won’t feel tomorrow.
Here when we stand,I’ll never b alone.
And u ll b there to warm my soul.
d poem convey tru feelings of a LOVER……d poem would hv been better had u used present tense rather dan past n future tense.
BEAUTIFUL…….WELL WRITTEN……..KEEP IT UP & HAPPY MAKAR SANKRATI & NEW YEAR………