Kya kahun, kaise kahun
kyun manzilein badal gayee-
Chal rahe the saath saath,
jaane kab raahen mud gayee.
Aksar jo khwabon mein dekha
Sapna sa woh ek manzar tha,
Khayalon se jise sajaaya
Woh saath to pal bhar ka tha.
Dhoondle se ab yaadein hain
Phir bhi humen tadpati hain
Bhoolane ki sau koshishen ki
Phir bhi yaad kyun aati hain.
Shayad yehi taqdeer ko manzoor
Ki humsaya woh ban jaye
Zindagi ke har mod pe
Hamesha humko yaad aaye.
Guzren dinon ki parchhaiyon mein
Khud ko bhi main paati hoon
Yaadon ke bhool bhoolaiye mein
Phir se main kho jaati hoon.
—-doel
nice poem with very sweet world
good
Nice and moving poem. Wish you all the best.
your coments is realy nice ,lakin jo samne bale se ager babfai karta hi to usko kya saja nai mileni chahiye
jo chahe wo kabhi nahi milta
sirf chaho aur yaadon main kho jaooo
AAPNE JO LIKHA PADKAR ACCHA LAGA…. USME JO AAPNE APNE KHAYAL KE BAARE ME BATAYA VO ACCHA LAGA BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..
HII DOLL, ITS NICE THINKING OF LOVE,,,BATITAIN BHOOL JATI HI PR YAADAIN YAD AATI HI,,,,,NICE TITLE
I Like u r Poem. Muze aapse dosti karni hai,Kya muzse doti karoge ? R U Ready for me ?
excellent…
batein bhool jati hain…yaadein yaad aati hai…nice 1
hi i am shree un dino ko yaaad kero ki jo ab naye aane wale hai
Bhooli hui yaadein itna na satao, ab chain se rehene do mere paas na aao. Ravi
hi iam himanshu kapoor my god it is to deep samundar ki gahraiyo se bhi jayada anyone who dumb u tell me i am interested .bye bye
b,full piece.
Poetry is not written, it comes automatically from your heart.
Liked your composition.
Keep it up:::::spsatti
sapna jaisa yade. romantic. haven
I must say you have put no efforts to compose this beautiful piece of writing; I firmly believe it has come spontaneously from the depth of your heart and that’’s why it is so pure and touchy ####### Suna hai loot liya hai kisi ko rahbar ne; yeh vaqaya to meri dastaan se milta hai ::::: beauuuutiful keep it up ::: Raaz
It is simply and purely touchy. I agree “yaadein meethe palon ki” means one and the same for every one. ::::: bus ek kasak#### Ek muddat huyee teri yaad bhi aayee na hume, aur hum bhool gaye hon tujhe aisa bhi nahin##### Keep it up - r kapur
bahut sundar
mithe palon ki yaad ,mithi kasak ban kar dil me har kisi ke hoti hai ,shabdo me piro kar kavita bana le,ye sabke bas ki baat nahi.
very touchy poem.keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!
I Love ur.Yadeen only yad aati hai.This poem same as my poem.
keep it up!!! u seems 2 b a good poet. keep posting…..awaiting 4 ur nxt poem.
Doel, it’’s just my feelings..my thoughts..what u”ve written..really, ye quambaqt yadeen jinee nehi dete..anyways, r u bengalee?
good
u r a good poet. I like ur throughts. I am waiting 4 ur next poem………
“tum to aate nahi, par tumhari yaad aksar aati hai mujhe !
abhi aur bhi jeena hai,yahi baat aksar satati hai mujhe !!”
Its just 4 u……………………………………………….
kya baat hai…….. maza aagya…….mujhe se dosti kro ge………
raat ko yaad aad aati ho …………………………
………………………………….sapano main bhi aati ho
to fhir milane kyo nahi aati ho…………………………