I see shadows on my wallFace strangers in my mirror
There is a message on the wall
An epitaph in the mirror
The veins turn pale
On seeing the shadows flicker
A chill rush down the spine
On hearing the strangers saunter
The message on the wall
Reads gore and wrath
The epitaph in the mirror
Chides a beginning of an end
Creepers cherish the flourish
Chameleons whack the cracks
Vipers poke to choke
And spume flows and glows
I see shadows on my wall
The message on the wall
Reads gore and wrath
Shaman shrewd and lewd
Retorts, snorts and aborts
Freeloaders quash and squash
With words that squirm to the requiem
I face strangers in my mirror
The epitaph in the mirror
Chides a beginning of an end
It's an elusive experience
It's an implausible explanation
Yet there's warm blood
Yet there's a cold coffin
stunningly anxious.
dark is good
the cold coffin! i empathise
why do you talk of the Devil? I liked the poem!
enigmatic, poignant!
The last of the lasts??? Interesting read!
hmmm…shadows and dark side….a very diff poem from u…
phew.. devilish verse
the wordplay is quite interesting .. I think I haven”t read anything like this on your iLand before.. nice one.
Isnt it a relief to know that the strangers in the mirror are elusive in appearance especially if the mood is so dark ..its better for them to be elusive than real…shadows in the dark..is it like your avatar..I dont know..but the mood is grim and despair vivid..
so you are turning into a poet……….great imagery……
Dark and vivid and poignant! Liked it!
is something wrong…black and grey mood poem ….:)
d msg reads gore and wrath…hope u knw how to sothe em??
i wish i could understand dis text
wonderful
Dark..very dark. What about stories? Why arent you writing anything new?
I face strangers in my mirror
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The epitaph in the mirror
…………….. i would be lying if i said i understood the poem ..
i cud not get the whole underlying meaning but whatever i cud make out was very chiiling and scary, why such piece of black poetry from a young chap
hmmm.. gone to the dark side, have you? may the force be with you