jungle ka andhera hai bahut tez hawa bhi;
aur zid hai hamari ki jalayenge diya bhi.
mausam ki inaayat hai ki sazish hai fiza ki;
ab loo ki tarah lagne lagi baad-e-saba bhi.
kyon sar ko jhukayega zamana tere aage;
kuchh aur tujhe aata hai rone ke siwa bhi.
is ped se khud toot kar ab fal nahin girte;
too kab se khada hai koi patthar to chala bhi.
heere ki tarah lagtaa hai har kaanch ka tukda;
kambakht azab cheez hai gurbat ka nasha bhi….
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apkey zid ki daad deni padegi, aisey tufani hawa main diya jalan ne ka saahas sirf aap hi kar sakte hai.
Kya khoob hai.
very nice. But I was wondering ..ghurbaat ka nasha bhi hota hai?
Very NICE dear…. Umind ki diya jalaye rahiye……..
bahut ki khubsurat aur inkelaabi shayari…..
woww shabeer, very nice poem, a meaningful attempt. good work keep it up.
subhanallah kya baat kahi hai…….kyon sar ko jhukayega zamana tere aage;
kuchh aur tujhe aata hai rone ke siwa bhi…………… bahut khub kaha……….. mana ye takdiro ka khel hai… mere hatho ki lakhire mere hi bas me nahi…. to kya hua tumne meri kismat me usse na likha….. main apni koshisho se yun harne walo main nahi……
apki zid ko hamara salam. behatareen kahs taur se pahala aur teesra sher………….. AAfreen
heere ki tarah lagtaa hai har kaanch ka tukda;
kambakht azab cheez hai gurbat ka nasha bhi….
passionate lines.
nice n touching thoughts……well expressed…..
jungle ka andhera hai bahut tez hawa bhi;aur zid hai hamari ki jalayenge diya bhi…..puri rachna behtreen hai par ye do line sabse touching lagi….
too good
nice
Your command over the language is terrific.
Your command over the language is terrific.
Nice thoughts…
bahut acche shabbir bhai……….too gud……carryin a touch of ghalib…..jo khud hi sawaal karte hai aur jawab bhi khud hi de dete hai…….wonderful….liked it n enjoyed it……take care n keep posting such wonderful poems
kya baat hai….
thanks 4 sharing….
HAWAIN BATAEN GEE ROSHNI KA PATA,
JIS DIVE MEIN TAIL HOGA WO JALTA RAHEGA
hmmm……….what a way to show your feelings :)…Nice post dear!
Abbas Bhai…Bahut khoob…JUNGLE KA ANDHERA HAI BAHUT TEZ HAWA BHI/AUR ZID HAI HAMARI KE JALAYENGE DIYA BHI…..kya bat hai…khubsurat andaz… all the best
bahut hi sunder….in last lines..jindagi ki sachai….simplt..tooooooooooo good.
wah kya baat hai….last two lines are superb
mi n d blowing……………..
beautifullllllllll………………