pan na tyala
na panyala mahit hott
tyanach prem
tya nirmatyala hi manjoor navhatt
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Vijay pal Singbh says
Hi Sara! I think u know better that how to move in heart someone…
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Saurabh says
hi sara i’m realy aspire though your thoughts. some time we loose our love 7 some time your loveitself loose you
so keep it up
always wright you thoughts to everyone
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Swastika Chatterjee says
hai SARA, you are Outstanding.
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shailendra gurjar says
ha thik thak he…….more improvement require…………….for more improvement……..ok shilpa G…
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ShivendraMohan Singh says
con8s….u r on front page…..
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ali adnan says
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
,
ali adnan says
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
,
ali adnan says
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
,
deepak kale says
hai sHILPA Congrats for your Blog and well Thoughts
bye
dd
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rudra mohanty says
congratulations.
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Anonymous says
Hi shilpa very nice mind blowing…
byee.tc.
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Kamal Nuhiwal says
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Kamal Nuhiwal says
Congratulations ! you are on Homepage.
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SNEHAMOY says
Hi!
I’m 4m Bolpur Satiniketan……aap ka nnam to pata chalta hain lekin aap-ki Kalam se ye to pata nehi chal paya ki ye …….aakhir aap ne likhha kis khushnaseeb ke liyea…………….???
Take Care…………TATA………
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sunil says
hi shilpa very nice mind blowing
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ankit sharma says
i will say one thing seriously….
i love to read the blogs but never write nethin..
but i dnt knw wat u were tryin to say in dis vry blog
moreover the another blog u hv written regardin the different ages in which u say i love u has got a miserable ending … quite unexpected
neways good u r on homepage today
but there are many more skillful nd i dnt knw y dey are not dere
neways great goin…
keep writin
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abc says
KAHIN to dhang se likho apne likha hai KANHI
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raj kashyap says
sabhi kuch too nahi hai paas totha sa hai paas
ye tum bhi jante ho ye hum bhi jante hai
sahi to hai ye baat ke paas hote bhi sabhi chale jate hai
koi kahi jata hai or koi kahi neekal jate hai .. bus kuch jo totha sa hai paas wo hi rah jata hai…
raj
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happy pal says
Raat bhi neend bhi kahaani bhi
Hai kya cheez hai jawaani bhi..
now react on this one…
love
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happy pal says
hey babes…good strat attempt…you got to go cracking…mmmmmuuuuaaaah.
all the v bst…
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shweta says
Hey Congrates Dear…..u r on home page….its time to cheers!!!!!!!!! God bless u…tkcr..
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Shiva ram says
hai, sara, that was very nice, thanks.
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Anonymous says
Hi, Sara, I read your blog, It charmed me, I ask for your friendship, are You? I am waiting for your reply.
Regards, nandalal
I thought that the modern genaration has forgotten LITERATURE
Dr
I like this. It’s toooooooooo gud
Congrats.. Sara
You are on the front page!!!!
very very gud
good veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good ok na
Its very nice. please keep on writing.
hi very good keep it up?
hi very good keep it up?
Hi Sara, nice to see “HUM NIKLE”. And love to read it again n again..
Hope to see many more from you..
congrats u ve made century …………..(frnds)
nice , thanks
It realy touch\\\’s the core of heart, xlent…..keep it up……..
very very amazing poem loved the way you have written hope to hear more from you
sanjeev
i was jst “chokd” wow…….
Hi!!! Shilpa that was an amazing poem it really touch me. So can we be frens???
hi it very good to it is very good job keep it up
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ann punha panya varati
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pan na tyala
na panyala mahit hott
tyanach prem
tya nirmatyala hi manjoor navhatt
Hi Sara! I think u know better that how to move in heart someone…
hi sara i’m realy aspire though your thoughts. some time we loose our love 7 some time your loveitself loose you
so keep it up
always wright you thoughts to everyone
hai SARA, you are Outstanding.
ha thik thak he…….more improvement require…………….for more improvement……..ok shilpa G…
con8s….u r on front page…..
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
kuch sawan k jhonke , kuch yaadon ki dhup
kuch askhon ki rimjhim , usme tera roop
kuch din ki ujali safedi , kuch chaandni raat ka jaadu
har rang leke nazaaron ka main teri maang saja dun
kuch chaanv ghani darakhton ki, kuch dhool tumhaare raaston ki
sar pe utha laayenge maathe pe saja laayenge
ek baar izaazat de do hum chupke se mar jaayenge
hai sHILPA Congrats for your Blog and well Thoughts
bye
dd
congratulations.
Hi shilpa very nice mind blowing…
byee.tc.
Congratulations ! you are on Homepage.
Hi!
I’m 4m Bolpur Satiniketan……aap ka nnam to pata chalta hain lekin aap-ki Kalam se ye to pata nehi chal paya ki ye …….aakhir aap ne likhha kis khushnaseeb ke liyea…………….???
Take Care…………TATA………
hi shilpa very nice mind blowing
i will say one thing seriously….
i love to read the blogs but never write nethin..
but i dnt knw wat u were tryin to say in dis vry blog
moreover the another blog u hv written regardin the different ages in which u say i love u has got a miserable ending … quite unexpected
neways good u r on homepage today
but there are many more skillful nd i dnt knw y dey are not dere
neways great goin…
keep writin
KAHIN to dhang se likho apne likha hai KANHI
sabhi kuch too nahi hai paas totha sa hai paas
ye tum bhi jante ho ye hum bhi jante hai
sahi to hai ye baat ke paas hote bhi sabhi chale jate hai
koi kahi jata hai or koi kahi neekal jate hai .. bus kuch jo totha sa hai paas wo hi rah jata hai…
raj
Raat bhi neend bhi kahaani bhi
Hai kya cheez hai jawaani bhi..
now react on this one…
love
hey babes…good strat attempt…you got to go cracking…mmmmmuuuuaaaah.
all the v bst…
Hey Congrates Dear…..u r on home page….its time to cheers!!!!!!!!! God bless u…tkcr..
hai, sara, that was very nice, thanks.
Hi, Sara, I read your blog, It charmed me, I ask for your friendship, are You? I am waiting for your reply.
Regards, nandalal
hi thanks for adding mr as a fr. my id is vivek_gkp20@rediffmail.com
reply soon buy tk care
congratulations……today you are on main page of rediffmail.
Congrats for being on Rediff home page…………………………
hi…Friend!
Aap ne likha to likha kis ke liye?
Aap to bahat achha likhte hein … Koi to hoga wo nasibwala jis keliye itna achha likhte hein aap .. Hum to padh kar khush ho jaate hein ..
its very good poem
oh dear really touching
very very nice poem
Your poem is very well