1- और नवम्बर सत्ताईस की सुबह नई ,
मुंबई पर था हमला जब ये ख़बर सुनी ।
जैसे ही मैंने टेलीवीजन खोला ,
दर्द विदारक चीखों से था मन डोला ।
मचा हुआ था चारों ओर महाक्रंदन ,
प्रभु मेरे विकलांग बने है रघुनन्दन ।
ले लो अब अवतार देश की धरती पे ,
दे दो छुटकारा आतंकी बस्ती से ।
पर प्रभु मेरी बात क्यो नही है सुनते ,
सपने में आकर वो मुझसे है कहते ।
“श्रेय” यहाँ जो अपनी मदद नही करते ,
सच हम भी तो उनकी मदद नही करते ।
२- और तभी मै चिंगारी देने आया ,
जुड़ जाओ सब साथ मेरे कहने आया ।
जान हाथ पर ले आगे बढ़ना होगा ,
दिल्ली से अनुरोध नही करना होगा ।
आँखें मूंदे बैठे है दिल के काले ,
है लाचार बने बैठे सत्ता वाले ।
नही ज़रूरत ऐसे किसी सरफरे की ,
हमें ज़रूरत है “हेमंत करकरे“ की ।
बटला में मरने वाले उस “मोहन“ की ,
आज ज़रूरत है ऐसे सनकीपन की ।
देश की खातिर कंधे जहाँ फड़कते हों ,
खून देश का अपना समझ भड़कते हों ।
३- जब छब्बीस मिल कर सौ -सौ को मार सकें ,
घायल कर दें सबको ख़ुद ना हार सकें ।
क्या हम उनसे ये भी सीख नही सकते ,
शर्म करो हम इतना जिगर नहीं रखते ।
राजनीति के दल ये दल - दल में अटके ,
आरोपों और प्रत्यारोपण में भटके ।
आतंकी दरिया में हम खाते गोते ,
फिर भी सारे मिलकर एक नहीं होते ।
आज मरे उनमें विदेश के सैलानी ,
भारत संस्कृति क्या है सबने पहचानी ।
अतिथि जहाँ देवों समान रखा जाता ,
आज उन्हें आतंक दैत्य ही खा जाता ।
४- आगे आओ मिलकर हाथ मिलायेंगे ,
भारत को फिर से आजाद कराएँगे ।
समझो बस इस धरती को अपनी माता ,
समझो सबको अपना ही भाई - भ्राता ।
नही ज़रूरत मुझको तख्तो ताजों की ,
नही ज़रूरत स्वागत की और बाजों की ।
मुझे ज़रूरत सबकी देश सुरक्षा में ,
मै मांगू बलिदान देश की रक्षा में ।
बोलो क्या मै ऐसे ही चिल्लाऊंगा ,
दो ज़बाब क्या ऐसे ही मै गाऊंगा ।
इंतज़ार है मुझको देश के पुत्तर का ,
इंतज़ार है मुझको सबके उत्तर का ।
—-श्रेय तिवारी , मुंबई
English Translation
1-And it was fresh morning of 27th November .
Mumbai was on the attack when I heard the news.
As soon I opened the Television .
And I heard painful screams, my heart was crying
People were running & crying everywhere .
But my GOD is acting like a handicapped .
Please take the embodiment at my country's land .
Give disengagement from the settlement of terror .
But why the lord is not listening to me
The dream is coming at me, and lord says ..
"Shreya" who don't help themselves ..
We really do not help them
2- Now I came here to spark you all
I came here to say with all added up
Life will proceed on the hand
And we don't have to request
Because they (black hearted) have closed their eyes
And all the leaders become poor & helpless .
We don't need stupid like them
But we need "Hemant Karkare" ..
We need "Mohan Chandra Sharma" (Who died in Batala House encounter)
Today we need craziness like that
When your shoulders start shivering for the country ..
And you start action ..when you see Indian's blood
3- When 26 terrorists can kill in hundreds .
If they could be harmful for thousands ..!!
Than we should learn from them can't we?
Don't we have such a strong heart..?
All the political parties acting like an individual
And they are blaming to each other
Here Indians are struggling against terrorism
And these bloody are not showing unity and strength…
Today there are lots of foreigners who have died in this attack
Everyone knows what is the Indian culture ?
Where we treat our guests like GOD .
Today the devil of terror has eaten them
4-Come ahead and we'll shake our hands .
And we'll try to free our country from terror
But just consider this land is our mother
And every Indian is our brother .
I don't need any crown and don't want to rule
No need you to welcome me
But I need you all for the protection of this country
I need your blood for this nation
Tell me would I scream like this ?
Tell me would I only sing like this?
I am waiting for country's son
And I am waiting for your replies ..
—–Shreya Tiwari, Mumbai
well expressed…..good one.
bahut accha !
mind bubbling
Realistic. If you please may visit my blogs….
bahut sundar likha hai aapne.
SAHI KAHA HAI SHREYA JI .BILKUL YAHI SOCH HUMKO AB IS ATANKWAD OOPI DANAV SE BACHA PAYEGI AB KISI KO APNE JAZBAT NE NAHIN KHELNE DENA HAI KI YE NETA APNI SIYASAT KI ROTI SENKEN.YE LOG HI APNE BHADKAOO BHASHANON SE AISE SIRPHIRE PAIDA KARTE HAIN JO KISI BHI DHARM KI AARH LEKAR YA DHARMIK UNMAD MEN KUCHH BHI VINASHKARI KAR JATE HAIN CHAHE WO GUJRAT KA BALWA HO YA PHIR MUMBAI BLASTS.SAB INHI NETAON KI KARTOOTEN HAI , HUMKO AB ISSE OOPAR UTH KAR SOCHNA HOGA TAKI PHIR KOI ATANKWADI HUMKO DARD NA DE PAYE , IN NETAON KO AB HUMKO YE SAMJHANA HAI KI DHARM KI RAJNITI KI TO VOTE NAHIN MILENGE, BHAI CHARE KI RAJNITI KARO HUM EK HAIN HUM ME PHOOT NAHIN DALON HUM AB NAHIN BHATKENGE AB BAHUT HO GAYA.
chuney gaye hain ye netha-log janatha se hee…badla apnoon se nahee liya jaatha hai jee,shatru aakhir kaun hai/unkey shadayanthroon ko thodna har naagarik ka kaam hai-ek netha log sirf janatha ke karmachaaree hain;unko ithna bhaaw aur maharaja/maharani jaisa maan maryada ,chamchagiri jis din dena bandh karengey hamari janatha ,us din jaagaran aur jaagruthi hoga…not to worry buddy - let’’s all focus on the real enemy n not the aaya raams n gayaraams-since these local politicos are our handiwork-apney hee karthoot hai naakaabil aur darpok ya lobhee netawon ko gadhhi pe bithaana but why wud they deliberately lose their seats by allowing the sad events?-asli dushman hastey hua baitha hai udhar-paschimee disha mein-let us all have d last laugh…RAKSHAK PER BHAJSHAK KO NYAAY DAYA KA DAANEE?
ur too good…
bilkul sahi ,samay ab jaagne ka hai ,ham sab ke liye bhi .
Yes, it is time not to cry but to take revenge…
We shouldn”t just ask the govt, but we have to change urself also, Don”t we have something to do for ur country…
now a time came to change system
and came to teach lesson to pak
that again they think 1000 times to do so
accha hai,lekin jab tak janta jaagruk nahi hogi tab tak aise hi hamle hote rahenge aur “hemant karkare n mohan……” jaise log shaeed hote rahenge.aur na jaane kitne masoom apni jaan se jate rahenge…………
GOD oversees all acts of creatures-humans,beasts,vampires…alwaysAnd,INDIA is GOD’’s own habitat…Therefore, GOD SHALL FOREVER BE WITH THE FAITHFUL FOLK…Let there be no doubt:no ”fidayeen”or terrorist-act can break our faith .It is an OPEN SECRET THAT terrorism is rampant in every other nation today including USA,UK,ISRAEL,AND IN BANANA REPUBLICS and terrorist-manufacturing lands like Pakistan and Emirates or INDONESIA which has the largest MUSLIM-Population…So, instead of crying foul let us all kill the wolves which dare attack us lest they reproduce their filthy kin and replicate such ungodly acts…YES,WE THE PEOPLE ought to exercise right franchise-power and ensure a majority-government in order to equip our personnel with all aids and tools to react effectively.OUR soldiers never blame their tools or Government,nor are the terrorists partial towards any particular Government in power -if it be INDIA.GOD BLESS INDIA-ALWAYS,AS ALWAYS!AND YOU TOO GOOD CITIZENRY!!!
Class poetry,very nice jaisi aapse ummid karte hai hum sab.
Well u r right!!
But dont u think that only saying awake and arise would help us!
can u, along with it , tell what to do?
Bcoz its time for some ACTION know!
Very well composed poetry! Keep up the good work! God Bless you!
Very True & Commone
Shreya bahut accha likha hai aapne………..It is really surprising that even when such five-star hotels have so much of security at the entrance, so many in-house camera’’s, etc still the terrorists were able to go with so much of ammunitions inside. Unbeleivable !!!……well ……..pray for those people who died in terrorist attack and for their families….
very true.
Shreya Ji !!! bahut khoob ……
My Salute to our army , commandos and their spirit!!!!
Ek sundar kavitaa.
Oj se bharpoor - ek aur shandaar rachna… Aur hum sab aapke jaisa hi soch rahe hain… Par aap abhi bhi muskura rahe ho - apni tasweer me?
Thats the spirit! Wish we get over this crisis very soon… Take care… (Rahul)
aap ke josh ko naman hai!! likhte rahiye……..tc
superb……………………….. josh bharne layak post..thnx y mumbai hai koi nhi rok payega isko
Shreya ..bahut sundar!! maan ko chhu jane wali kavita hai…
Shreya ek pal ka josh is aatank ki gahri jadon ko khod kar nahi nikaal sakega,iske liye to nirantar bina bhatke kaarya karna hoga,aapsi matbhedon ko bhulaa ke ek hona hoga,in netaon ki angrezi niti ”divide and rule” ko samajhna hoga..tabhi hum sahi maayno mein ekjut ho paenge aur apne gaurav ko lautaa ke aatankiyon ka safaaya kar paenge..
………………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am just speechless……………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Superb poetry……………..we want a poem like this at this stage……….!!
Hi Shreya, what all happening in Mumbai is truly very disturbing… Par aapki kavita ne mann ko bahut shaanti di hai aur himmat se kaam lekar ekjut khade hokar saamna karne ki prerna di hai…
My heart weeps for al the people who lost their lives ,the hostages and the people trapped inside!pray that no more life is lost and the hurt are back to normal!. . . . . . . . . great post shreya!!let us stand united. . . . . let us stand tal!. . . . .
hmm.i was looking for in gtalk…but suddenly i opened rediff cud see ur poem..kal raat se man dukhi tha..per tumahri kavita padh ke ro li….kya karein..bahut bebasi lag rahi hai…kahan pukare kisko pukarein….tumhari kavita bahut achhi hai..kaash is pukaar pe..ham sab mil ke kuchh kar sakein..aur nili chhatri wala neeche a jaaye!
aapki rashtrabhakti ko shat shat naman. kashhhhhh hamare neta nihit swarthon se kuchh uper uthte.
Dil ko choo gaee
shrey……………T.V. dekhana band karo. aur aise garm joshi ke vichar hi anatak ki mata hai, aise vichar bhi na failao………….knyoki antak wadi cahate hai unaka nam ho. log unse dare……..unhe dhyan mat do …police pe bharosha rakho unhe unaka kam karne do…………ham log bate karke hamari bhawana ko bhadakye ge ,aur galat kadam uthayege jo desh ke liye hani karak hoaga…
dil ko chhu lene wali!!!…keep writing n tc
shreya! desh ke halaat ko dekh kar dil bahut hi dukhi ho jata hai..her taraf nafrat,dharm ki ,jati ki,bhasha ki,praant ki……aur na jane kya -kya…..aaj ke samay me aap ki KAVITA SAMYIK HAI……………bahut hi aachha likha hai aap ne….main aap ke sath huin……
You have really good hindi and attacked on the right node of hindi keep writing………….
You have struck the right note at the right time! Bahut aacha likha hai!
Keep writing…
just too good……..too much touching heart………yes, we should become one, only then and then we will have peace, otherwise these people will leave us nowhere………….main aapkey zazbaat ki kadra karata hoon, aapkey saath hoon.
Rashtra bhakti ka jajba aur samayik chintan yukt bhavon ko abhivyakt kiya hai aapane.is josh aur hosh ki aaj desh ko sakt jarurat hai,aapane sahi ahwan kiya hai,salam hai,aapake jajbe ko…kim.
quite touching…