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Strange

After what felt like

Aeons of monotony

I feel for the first time


Curious, Unusual


Strange.



Strange


Like Old times


Somewhat there


Though not quite.


Weird.


Strange weather


Inside my head

Uncanny warmth


Down my thoughts



Glint of sunshine


Music from a distant shore


Enticed to un-resist


The craving for more



Tempted to scare away


Clouds of Ambiguity


Scepticism, Contradiction


I feel


Unhinged.



After what seemed like


Aeons of frost


I feel for the nth time


Unnerved


Amorphous


Imperfect


Strange.


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A very dear ilander friend of mine has sent these amazingly beautiful lines as an ode to ’strange’, lines that truly compliment the lines above (has anybody heard of cis-trans complementation? never mind, thats a hard-core genetic term :) ) …my friend chooses to be anonymous hence my hands are tied (however itching my fingers might be to shower credit for this wonderful gesture)..but this is probably what I’ll think some years from now,, the later the better though :)



The Inevitable

After centuries of ectasy

For one last time

Let me experience

Boredom, routine and cliche.

Cliche…like it is fresh

Always been here

But was invisible

Yet inevitable.

Bored ozone layers

Within my soul

Such familiar chill

Inside my being

Shadows of clouds

Silence of blood

Refusal irresistible

Never again Never !!

I face it head on

Confusion no more

Vanished paradox

Enigma unfurled

My freedom!

Later I knew just

Icicles formed in nano second

I sense it now, then, again and again

Confident, formulated

Routine and

Cliched.


19 comments to Strange

  • Good poems , both of them(cis-trans complementation as in the Crick and Watson model?..college days so far away in the past, you see). Is the friend for real or did you write it yourself. It’’s perfectly asynchronised :-)

  • nirmal

    two lovely poems back to back… what a lovely experience it was to read them… The flow was so smooth.. nice one. its been a long time since i read some good poetry… I now feel happy that i chose to visit your page today… thanks for that lovely work



  • hmmm…. good work antara

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  • wonderful combo!…enjoyed the read..:))

  • Niiice Odes……..glad to know such admiration for fellow i landers!!!!!

  • fantastic poems

  • KB

    feeing strange is just a normal strain- especially for the unhinged amorphously arranged brain! nice poem, just joking! what happened?

  • kuch to hua hai……kuch ho gaya hai…..2/4 din sey lagta hai aisa…..sab kuch naya hai…..:)))))))))

  • Yeah, sometimes you could die just to feel good old you. Nice poems both. And its a great thing to have a poem in response to a poem. I mean I once write a coupla lines as a comment to this lady and she got all emotional and all. I mean she’’s real sweet, this lady.

  • beautiful poems!

  • Funny but i looked up for loquaciousnes word you have in your poem. Andill say its quite a good one.
    Cheers

  • is it okay if i say … i didnt understand both the poems …. guess im a doufus after all :-(((

  • Both are breath-takingly beautiful!!!

  • Complementary change…beautiful both the poems :)


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  • ur emotions- just let them be, ur state- just stand in there, the strangeness- let it flow…. after all, look what came out of it, a fantastic poem! :p

  • b”ful post antra…………….

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