[A REPOST FOR MY NEW FRIENDS] I WAS LOOKING AT THE SEA, BLUE,VAST,CALM AND DEEP. I WONDER-WHAT IT SAYS? DOES IT INDICATE LIFE, WHICH IS AS UNFATHOMABLE? AS IF IT HAS STOLEN THE COLOUR OF THE SKY, A FEW SEA GULLS OR MAY BE ALABATROSS, HOVERING OVER AND GIVING ME COMPANY. THE WIND BRINGS IN SALTY SMELL, A BOARD SAYS– ‘SOUTHERN MOST POINT OF ASIA CONTINENT’. THE PALM TREES SWINGS SLOWLY BUT SILENCE REMAINS. I THINK AND THINK, HOW TO FATHOM MY LIFE. HOW TO SEE THAT IS UNSEEN? GOLDEN RETREATING SUN LIGHT SIGNALS END OF ANOTHER DAY. CHINESE FISHING BOATS AT FAR ALMOST NEAR THE HORIZON. A SADNESS DESCENDS AND I LOOK AT MY WATCH….. ‘SHE SHOULD HAVE BEEN HERE….!! BY NOW……’ ——–8888———-
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Great work, poetji. Keep it up.
the sea is infinite; life is not. sea might have stolen the colour of sky; let not ”her” steal happiness from you. very nicely written
Did we not read before, people do come in our lives for a reason,and now instead of waiting, cfreate the reason for “she” to come instead of lookinginto the depth of the sea. And you seem to have imbibed that blue shade of the sea and sky to reflect ur moods.
that she is already with u , in you and in front of you and all around u……………. can u see her?
may be the sea signifies infinity …
Sidd it really reaches up to the bottom of the heart
wonderful, do keep writing
as i read this, i felt like sailing in the middle of the sea. (”,)
nice poetry dear
no difference between she and he,,,,,,,,same…You can never see Him if you don”t see you are Him,Could the waterdrop ever reach the sea
If it didn”t know the Sea is boiling inside it?
perhaps she was lready there by then,,,may be you didnt noticed it that way
nice poem