खामोशी अब चीख रही है …..साहिल अब डूबा रहा है……ज़िंदगी मार रही है…..दिल शिथिल हो रहा है…..ज़ुबान खामोश हो रही है……निगाहें कुछ देख नही रहीं…..पूनम की रात अंधेरी है……सुबह का सूरज काला है…….सब बेवफ़ाई कर रहें….ए मौत तू इनमें शामिल ना होना…जिस सुकून की तलाश में मैं भटक रहा…..वो जरूर देना………….जरूर देना !
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dua karti hoon ki aapko zindagi se sukoon mile !!!! Maut zindagi ke doosre pehlu hi toh hain.
difficult to read fonts…took lot of time, but it’’s nice poem!
i am in joy and the joy is a plaintive one.
just a poem..??//….or expressions from deep within…..???………hota hai..hota hai….zindagi ke kisi mod par aise bhi khayaal aate hain……raat ke baad lekin, seher bhi nischith hai……
Wonderful (sad but real) words!!
sundar abhivyakti..par gahri udaasi ki..khush rahiye aur khushiyaan baantiye..hamesha ki tarah..
bahootkhoob janab….great lines..!
.master of words .n itna………………ganghor andhera…….. jiwan mai sukh dukh to aate hi hai …..bas yahi sochkar har pal ko jiyo k are man ab tu shant rah.y pal bhi guzar jayege……….
Mrutyu kya hai..? Saanso ka chhut jana..? Sharir ka sthuul ho jana..? Aatma ka iss nashwar deh chhod parmatma se mil jana..? Mrutyu kya hai…??? Har pal hum kitna marte hai…??? Hum iss jivan ko kitna jite hai..??? Har pal me jivan bharna… jibhar jina… wo sahi me Mrutyunjay hai..!!! Aur jo Mrutyunjay hai uss k liye maut yaani ishwaar ka prasaad…!!! In a way death is an angel…
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ek sher apke sath share karna chahunga —- “badi mud-dat se tammna thi mar jane ki…… magar yeh ho nahi sakta jiye bagair……”
sorry for the delayed comments…..some network problems were there in my area!………….jeevan ek sangharsh hai….aur ismein vijay paane wale ko hi mrityuoprant sukoon haasil hota hai! krishan bhakt hoker jeevan sangraam se ghabra jana shobhniya nahi hai Ranjan!
Sad expression, Saloman …..but, how true ..
You are ON SONG, man…. I was about to write words from a favorite cut, until I saw Pooja Bishnoi’’s comment.
jitni gehrayee hai isme , utni hi udaasi bhi….. beautiful poetry amazing poetic expression.
emotions can be feel thru this……
NICE POEM……………………ONLY TO READ……….reminded me of d shayari on ur homepage…………………….koi rog zaroori hai jeene ke liye……ghum bhi zaroori hai jeene ke liye
wow it’’s really heart touching. “zindagi to bewaffa hai ek din tukrayege maut mehbooba hai apne saath lekar jayege.”
bahut sunder ahi aapki kavita, par itni behal..
bahut achha…..remember dat song…..mout aani hai aaigi ek din.jaan jaani hai jaayegi ek din….aisi baaton se kya ghabrana ……jindgi ek safar hai suhana …yahan kal kya ho kisne jaana…….tc..
kya b***** hai soloman….zindagi bulaa rahi hai…………dil me josh hai……..zubaan par pyaar hai…….nigaho ko saathi mil gaya…come on this is not YOU . Hugzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and smile friend. this too shall pass and you shall be the ball of energy that you are-the one your frineds love
very good but pessimistic…..However pessimism is also part of life and one can not afford to run away.
“We tend to forget that happiness doesn”t come as a result of getting something we don”t have, but rather of recognizing and appreciating what we do have.” Hello Sir……….A Very Very Good Morning!!!!!
nice