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agar tanhai sath ho………
Intazaar me mahasoos ki, tanhai ka nasha ko chardte huae;
Jaam hai tanhai jo pi li thori si,
Aashkon ko rakh li mai kisi bura wakt ke lia;
Nasha usmevi kuch kam nahi;
Muhabbaat satgi hai, to tanhai uski parcchhaii;
Khoosh naseeb wo hai jo tanha hai;
Jaha muhabbat khoneka khauf hai;
Wahin tanhaii JANNATka sidri;
Manzil taq hamesha sath sath .
Muhabbat khuda hai ..
Muhabbat manzil hai…….
Agar tanhai sath ho……….
Love is Lord love is life ..Love connects ..
Love connects the whole world!!!!!!!!
waah sres ..kya picture paste ki hai aapne…aur lines bhi behad sundar hain…!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love is all. Love is life.
Sreshtha, please refer some words in your post…
satgi ? what is meaning of sidri? what is the meaning of tanhai[explain in hindi and english, both,,i would like to clarify it..] after you reply, i”ll comment later,
so beautiful poetry……………..
bahut sunder kavita likhi hai aapney…
This is nice poetry, Sreshtha ……somewhat sad, poignant ……..closer to realities of life.
Hi Shretha di, Tum to bahut sundar likhti ho, phir aanshoon ki kya baat hai. Tanhai ki kya baat hai .Chup ho jayo, mujhe bataayo, tum kya paresani hai. Tumara ye baby bada pyara hai.
yaa U r correct dear frnd Shres………..vey beautifull words building up a very natural poem………dear…………keep it up……..wish U all the best………..tc
beautifull expression …god bless you
solitude improoves personality…gooriabitia…I am glade that you are going in the right direction..you”re my daughter..you are enogh strong to glitter high in the sky..why to save tears.. the bad time has been passed..I pray it would not come again now you are going to shine high in the sky of litereture and in your life too…keep better adjustment in your family and believe on The God..now i am looking an iron-lady in your latest post… good sign…. keep it up & spread pure love your dadooo