Hawa ne darkht ke patton se
jane kay kaha
darkht par bethe sare
parinde ud gaye
ek arsa guzar gaya
loat kar bhi nahi aye
shakhon se toot kar
girne lage pile patte!
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Ek uchai hai aapake shabdo me bandhi rachana me,avykt ko aap sashakt aawaj me vyakt karatin hain,badhai……………KIM.
oh….wonderful….
Shreya, hawa ne kya kaha, kuchh tumne nahi suna,
Hawa ne khaha, main kahin kabhi rookti hoon kya?
Aao mere pichi pichi, duniya dekho aankhiya meeche.
Gir jayo jahan mile aaram, fir aao duniya ke kaam.
Patjhad me jo patte gir jate hain, wo lautate nahi,
par har patjhad ke baad bahaar aati hai ek nai subah nai shuruaat ke saath, naye patton ko janm dene ke liye……….bahut khoobsurat kavita..
suunder darshnik kavita.
Very good simile with refined thoughts..Nice…
kasid se kaho.. aankhon ki aawaz pade…kuch to keh raha hai ye sannata….!!!
jis tarah kisi parvat se barf pighalti hue jamin pe aa girti hai,
very good very nice dear Shreya …..waah kya baath hai my frnd……………baath mei bahut dum hai…………..very gr8 passion …………..a long wait……….but its seasonal…..everything remakes up again………..dont worry……b happy……….lovely post………..keep it up……….thnxfor sharing……….all the best……..tc