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Suraj

Saare din ka

dhul se bhara

dhup se tapa

thaaka hua lal suraj

palken jhapka kar

dekhti hai shaam use!

Posted in Poetry.


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  1. Anju Pangty says

    bahut sunder bhaav ……..

  2. kim agrawal says

    Ek gahara ahasas aur utani hi sundar upama, prishth-bhumi kaa kalevar bhi sango-pang hai.utkrisht abhivyakti par badhai……….kim.

  3. ShivendraMohan Singh says

    nice depiction

  4. DrVikash Mangal says

    Jab kaam karte hein vahi thakte hein,
    Jo thakte hein unhi ko sachchi bhook lagti hai.
    Mehnat karne walon ko hi sachchi need aati hai,
    Dusre din vahi suraj ban kar nikalte hein.

  5. Mukesh Gupta says

    Very nice composition……great.

  6. Aameen Khan says

    wah!!!!!!! bahut suunder kalpana.

  7. tanuj neogi says

    Beautiful thoughts with suitable imagery..

  8. sandhya kulkarni says

    or khud hi sihar jati hai….!! waah…!!!

  9. rajesh singh says

    the routine of life in ur eyes become so beautifull

  10. SHEKHAR BHATTACHARJEE says

    yeh tho prakritee ka khel hai Shreya …..my frnd………but U hav defined very beautifully dear…….in such a short ”lubz”……….my dear frnd………..keep it up……..very nice post …..thnx for sharing…….all the best………..tc

  11. sanjay arora says

    beautiful lines…………….

  12. SARA says

    aur ye suraj paani me doob kar bujh jaayega…aur phir ek nai subah laayega…………..

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