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Tamnna

Mere dil ne jab kabhi

Teri tamnna ki

Main apne hatton ki lakiron me

ulajh kar reh gayi

Posted in Poetry.

By Shreya Sharma – November 6, 2009


19 Responses

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  1. manav Chak says

    Touching……. Words…….

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  2. stranger says

    nice post chand shabdon mein kitni gehrai hai.

    suno us ne dekha hi nahi apni hatheli ko kabhi, us ne dekha hi nahi apni hatheli ko kabhi, us mein kahi dhundali si meri bhe lakir to hai.

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  3. jhankar says

    kyu aakhir lakiro ke jaal m fass gye tm……………………………
    kyun na socha ki hm to tm m hi the………..
    hatheli ki jagah dil m jo dekh lete tm,to jaan pate………….
    hm hi hm tmhari takdir,sitaron m the…………………….

    VRY BEAUTIFUL LINES BY U……..I CUDNT HELP MYSLF ADDING A FW 2 THM……………………………….
    COMPLETION ………………..

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  4. Gopi Goswami says

    wah kya lines hain…and nice pic too

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  5. Anju Pangty says

    bahut khubsurat ahsaasat utne sunder lafzon ke saath……..

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  6. Tipntop says

    beautiful pic and lines

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  7. Mohammed Azaad says

    Nice….

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  8. ShivendraMohan Singh says

    good one

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  9. DrVikash Mangal says

    Dil ki tammana ko, hathon ke himmat mein khojo,
    Hath ki lakiren to hathon ke bandhan hein.
    Kam karne wale agar lakeeren ko dekh kar chalte,
    Duniya ka har inshan bhooke mar rahaa hota.

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  10. Dhairaya Singhal says

    Nice.

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  11. aarti vannur says

    Shreya, nice lines.
    I have also written some lines on same topic Tamanna. Read my poems on I-land.
    Arati

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  12. Mukesh Gupta says

    Wah kya khoob kahi hai……

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  13. Aameen Khan says

    bahut khuub likha hai yeh sher….. Yeh ek sher aapke liye : jab bhi main haathon ki lakiron ko dekhti huun…… ek raasta jaata hai tumharey muukaam ki taraf………….aameen

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  14. tanuj neogi says

    Restrained words with full of sensitivities..Nice..

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  15. venkata ramana says

    dil ki tamanaa/ haathon mei lakeer? honthon pe muskurahat/nice thoughts Mam .good.

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  16. prashant shah says

    very nicely narrated deep rooted thought, wonderful shreyaji………

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  17. sandhya kulkarni says

    or un lakkeeron me basa li khushbu….!! kya khoob….

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  18. rajesh singh says

    nice one, meaningfull, but i would like to tell u
    Kaun kahta hai aasman mein surakh nahi ho sakta
    Ek pathar to jara kabiliyat se uchhalo yaaron

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  19. SHEKHAR BHATTACHARJEE says

    unhu………kuchh nahi karthe yeh haathho ki lakeere ……dear ….Shreya………..my frnd………jo karna hai insaan ko soche samajhkar……….karna padhtha hai my frnd………..but tumhaare veechaar bhut sunder lage………..hotho aur haathho ke ishaaro mei hi sub kuchh likh gaya………nicely written……..keep it on……..my best wishes……………..t c

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