Fiza main bikhra hai kohraa
oas ki choti-choti bunde
raat ki aankhon ki nami hain
chale gaye sitare neend ki aagosh main
chand ki palkne bhi bojhal hain
gungunati hai hawaa darkhton ki shakhon main
ek geet
jiske bool use yaad nahi
aasman main akhri rang pighlta hai
din khada hai raat ke intaazar main
jab tak raat usme samaa nahi jati
Shukriya
nice….
good one Shreya,keep writing………..
WONDERFUL POST…………………Thanks for your wishes………
bahut khoob …………prkati ki prem ki kalpna ati uttam ban gaye hai… sara ji badahi sweekar kare
really very nice…
sundar kavy-vyanjana aur utana hi sundar upamao kaa chayan,sath me kalpanao ki udan par dharatal par khadi bhavanaye, sabkuchh anubhut saa pratit karati hai aapaki rachana,pathak ko.sashakt aur saras hai aapaka rachana sansar.achchhi baat ye ki aap vishay ko dharatal se uthati hain aur use prakriti ke daaman me yon lapetatin hain ki shabd,kavy sarita kaa pravah chhalakate hain.sashakt rachana par badhai………….KIM.
cool
awesum*
gungunati hai hawaa darkhton ki shakhon main ……..bahut sunder rachna………
pic and poetry both too good…….
waah great
emotion recollected with fervour.
Dear Friend Shreya……….very nice poem…..keep it up………..SURYAKIRAN
beautifully emotional ………..nice one:)
manzaro m khoye rhte ho ae dost, vo kaun sa darakht h jiski tmhe tallash h………………vo kya gumnaam jarra h , tmhari shayari ki har bund m jiski aas h……
very well presented shreya……….nice .keep it up………..
Shreya very well presented….nice feelings…bahut badhiya…keep it up.
Nice Presentation!!!
Komal bhavon ki abhivyakti wali ek sumadhur kavita.
Delicate touches of feelings…Good imagery…Nice one…
Din khada hai raat ke Intzar mei….jab tak raat usme samaa nahi jaati….
excellent thoughts….
oas ki choti-choti bunde
raat ki aankhon ki nami hain…..beautiful lines….really nice poetry
Din khada hai, raat ke intazar main……… what a beautiful imagination dear……..liked this sentence very much.
Bahut hi bhavbhari madhur kavita, kuchh daeshanik put liye.
true description of sardi ki subah, very good one…………………
yes too warm dear Shreya………my frnd…….a very lovely post after along interval…………wow………so nicely written…i liked tht…..dear……….do write n visit……..thnx for sharing…..keep it up…….wish u all the best………..tc
thand ki raat or tera saath.. !! nice dear..judaee itni haseen bhi hoti hai..hame maloom na tha…!! nice pic..! nice lovely post…!!!apne shahar ki thand ka aana hi aur hai…!!!
bahut sundar chitran kiya hai aapne sardi ki subah ka………marvolus
very nice !!!!!!!!!ek shar yaad aa gai………….
“Shardi ki thand, haath me haath kitni garm hoti hai,
tujh se bichda, to aaj mujh khyal aaya,
us sard raat me tera haath kitne thande the…………..
nice one……..thanx 4 ur lovely comments Shreya:)