Ajeeb Shakhsiyat hoon Khudh ko jalana chahti hoon,
Mein khudh ko rakh kar kahin bhool jana chahti hoon,
Mere naseeb ki khushiyan bhi kab milli mujhko??
Bas ab to umar bhar ansoo bahana chahti hoon,
Na janey kitni mohabbat hai ranj-o-gham hai mujhey,
Koi bhi dard ho dil mein chupana chahti hoon,
Baha baha ke yeh ansoo bikhar chuki hoon bohaat,
simat ke raat mein ab muskurana chahti hoon,
Jisey ek umer se Dil mein basa ke rakha hai,
Woh raaz aaj mein sab ko batana chahti hoon,
Wohi yaad hai jo acha kaha hai logo ne,
Baqaya sarey sitam bhool jana chahti hoon,
Mujhe zamaney ne pathar samajh liya hai magar,
Mein ek insaan hoon sab ko batana chahti hoon,
Jo mujh se ruth chuki hain zamane ki khushiyan,
To mein bhi khushyon se ab ruth jana chahti hoon,
Woh meri khwahishein, woh mera khwaab, woh meri bechani,
Umar rafta mein phir se woh pana chahti hoon,
Koi to ho jo mujhe bhi lagaye seenay se,
Kisi ko mein bhi gham apna sunana chahti hoon.
ZAKHM JO AAPKI INAYAT HAI IS NISHANI KO NAAM KYA DE HUM
February 23rd, 2009 by manju.baxi Leave a reply »
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kaha thhee ab tuk aap………..keep it up
kya khub likhati hai ap……ham to yahi guzarish karenge ki ap apna gam bhi bataye to muskra kar…..
……….seems to hurted a lot…nice to express it out insted of brooding…surely feeling calm now? good luck for healing….
Very good expressions, especialy liked…….
Koi to ho jo mujhe bhi lagaye seenay se,
Kisi ko mein bhi gham apna sunana chahti hoon
“Manjuji” Bahut achhai kavita very good presentation “Dil ke dardo ko bas pijare mein band rahene do, bahar nikaloge jo jamana hans ke uda dega” Aur agar koi samjhega to bhi koi matlab nahin, kyaonki o pahele se hi Ghayal hoga……… really its very nice poem
Ati sunder kavita, dil ko chchu lenewali……..jo sabsey jyada pasandida lines hai voh hai :”Koi to ho jo mujhe bhi lagaye seenay se, Kisi ko mein bhi gham apna sunana chahti hoon”………bahuut khub……..
Hi!!!
Bahut hi sudar……..
Dil ko chuu liya apne…………..
Shabdo ko aschi tarah bun kar HAAL-e-DIl bataya hai apne………………
Superb ! really its a heart blowing………
very nice
Very Touching manju…….
I have gone through ur heart touching, beautiful and precious thought. Really it is so good.
Please carry on with this thought.
all the best.
Manju….sab se pehle to rediff ke Home Page par chamakne ki badhai… us ke bad itni khubsurat ghazal ki mubarakbad…YEH TO TANHAIYON KA SATHI HAI/DARD HOTA NAHI DAWA KE LIYE..!all the best
ek ek shabd dard mei dooba hua hai , bahut dardila hai ! ye dard ki dastaan bahut sundar hai
Dard se hum ne dosti karli… Kambakht ye aansuo ko behne ki aadat ho chali…! Manjuji… aap k har lafz se dard tapakta nazar aa raha hai. Yuhi koi nahi likhta ye dard ki baat hai uss pe wah wah nahi kiya jata. Dua karti hu aap ko samjne wala wo sathi mil jaye jis ke sirhane sar rakh aap apne gam bhul jaye. May GOD bless you.
khush raho dear! MAy GOD bless u !!!
found this very bittersweet…………full of angst n hope….worthy of homepage….congrats!
good lines. dont leave hopes. If somebody has dumped u, he will be dumped one day and then he will realise his mistake. GOD is great
shikaytain to kamjor karte hain,jo log zindgi ke diye gum yaad rakhte hain wohi log,tufan main aage badte hain.
Congrats for being der in the home page. ur poem is fantastic.
JO SAKOON DARD OR DUKH MEIN HAI WOH KHUSHI MEIN NAHIN
KHUSHI TO CHAR DIN KI HOTI HAI
GUM TO JINDGI BHAR SAATH DETEIN HEIN
BE BRAVE
Awesome lines and emotions within it!
You cannot be alone ever…. you have your sensibilities and heart to guideyou along! GOD BLESS YOU.
yeh dard hai is liye ke ham aasha rakhte hai, aagar chode de aasha to dard se bahut door rahte hai.
jindgi ankh se tapka ak berang katra,dere daman ki panah pata to ansu hota.
dard ka sundarta se bayan waha kya bat hai
sk.lokhande
its good….achha likhti hain aap….
shaayad kal kuch badal jaaye aapke likhne se……
ultimate writing but is dard ko pad k padney jarur kuch na kuch sochney pe majbur ho jayega . really very nice send me more lines written by u
Manju kyo Roti ho? Yar Khusiya Bato.
Nice writing , Combination of words are good .
Dil pe chakkoo marti hai ye sari line.
WOW
it’’s very nice & meaningful
its neally very nice.par dard se itna pyar mat karo.bahut satata hai ye.take care have a nice day.
DARD KO DARD SE NA DEKO KIYKO DARD KO BHI DARD HOTA HAI IS DARD MAIN DARD HI HAMDARD HOTA HAI.
mubarak ho..par itna darad kyun?
nice write
waah …..ye kuch baat hui…..aaj mili hai dawat-e-khas ki bhanak ….. jo itne din pardo main the aaj mili hai unki bhi ek zalak……waki bhot aacha likha hai
Nice very nice. Not your sorrow. but presentation of sorrow is just beautiful.
Masha Allaha !!!!
a very beatiful poem full of emotions
Full of emotions of self pain which inspired me my own days when I was in full swing. You expressed your own feelings in a pensive mood of thoughts. Please continue to share…
You have expressed the inner voice for self satisfaction and of course, it is a very good work. Keep going on!
very well written n picture compliments ur thoughts.
Looking into the shayri , I recollect the peom
Viyogi hoga pahla kavi , aah se nikali hogi gan,
nikalkar ke ashru kan se phuti hogi kavita anjan
very touching.
soul stirring poem!
TERE JAZBO KO MAI SARHANA CHAHATI HO,BUS EK ALFAZ MAI YE KALAAM TAMAM KARNA CHAHATI HO,…SUBHANALLAH,,,VERY NICE….
Itna dard hai ki ab dard bhi muskura diya ankho mein ansu dekar…..its a beautiful poetry…..gr88….all d best!!
very touching……. congrats being on home page.
hv a nice time ahead……
dard bhari kavita , well written