A gentle stir
Of nascent breath
In the dormant
Hibernating soul
Limping to life
A feeble ray
Of forbidden hope
Seeking salvation
Of languid desire
In last agony
Sprinkles of
The first shower
Rejuvenate
The weary heart
Sinking to depths of despair
Now afloat on
Waves of surging hope
Conjuring fluid dreams
Heralding spring
And radiant blossoms
The wanton wind
Whispering
A sensuous strain
Caressing, cajoling
Ambling along
Stoking the embers
Beneath the ashes
Smouldering into
A conflagration
Ignited by raindrops
wow…..a superb flow of words…….so beautifully expressed
very stirring!
a good poem.but just a suggestion.plz put a bit more thought to it.i love the frame you captured .anyways the poem is good….
A radiant poem brimming with optimism and hope. Indeed fire flies sometimes carry more light than the sun……….PGR
Ditto Prabhu & Mana — WOW!!! Very Haiku-like, evoking delicating emotions. Warm Regards, Ghost
Wow! Beautiful composition! Each line creates great feelings inside; that I have never lived through.. that I can never explain! You are truly gifted…you are amazing! Go on!
wow!!!!!!!………back with a bang!!…..Every line says a lot….and in the “Udita Dictionary style”…..B.E.A.utiful!!!…exclamations are all i can give for ur poetic side, coz my words fail to speak up..keep posting more!!
I had to read it again.Can i copy this? I promise,i wont use this anywhere.
loved it….
simply said- extremely beautiful verse!
wow, this is simply superb!
My God Goodness gracious… how did i miss this one?? i”m feeling as if… i”ve eaten a lot of gol guppas… i mean i”m feeling rejenuvated after reading this.Wow! One of ur best works Udita.(u must”ve hundreds already!)
an amzing assortment of vivid but imaginative images to depict the new hope….
hope your hope blossoms!! All the best!!
incredible one udi….is it really you? - i would gladly send the nomination for a booker equivalent of poetry….wow….just too good….
mind blowing….i am speechless
Whoa, such imagery! The poetess is back in form! You know what? Your imagination works in spheres that can only be imagined by my imagination. Go figure it out…
“A conflagration ..Ignited by raindrops”thats a stunning imagery ..
cud sense the freshness of a dew drop in ur poem……………..amazn images…………..sid.
ignited by raindrops…wow…what an image…T
this is beautiful.. wat a way to bring in spring.. n that too on a lazibonean like me! darn! i guess i`m in trouble now.. but i`ll keep mi promise.. i`ll post ..soon.. as soon as i get this nu *yaaaawn* mornin up n goin …