AALUM
YE ANDHERA CHHATA HUA AUR TANHAI KA AALUM, KASAKATI HAI SHAAM JAB DIL UDAAS LAGE….
YE PHOOLON KI MUSKURAHAT AUR DARAKHTON KI GHANI CHHANV, CHAHEKATI HAI SHAAM JAB MILAN KI AAS JAGE….
YE LAUTATE PANCHHI AASHIYANE KO AUR BACHCHON KI KHILKHILAHUT, MAHEKATI HAI SHAAM JAB APNO KA SAATH MILE….
YE INTEJAAR KI GHADIYAN AUR RAAH TAKATI NAJAREN, SISAKATI HAI SHAAM JAB HUMSAFAR JUDA CHALE….
AAGAAZ
RAAT SE PAHELE HI PATA CHAL JATA HAI KAISI HOGI NEEND, KHWABON MEIN GAMI HOGI YAA HANSI CHEHARA, SARAKATI HAI SHAAM DIL KE ARMAANO PE….
RUKATI NAHIN SIRF SANS LETI HAI, MUKTI NAHIN SIRF AAS DETI HAI, THAHERATI HAI SHAAM AANKHON KE PAIMANO PE….
ANJAAM
YE SHAAM HUMESHA SUBAH KA PAIGAAM DETI HAI….
MUKAM PE SUSTAKAR MANJIL KA ANJAAM DETI HAI….
vikas
Very nice….
HOW ROMANTIC SHAM
shaam ka khushnuma lamha aap ki khubsurat rachna me dikhta hua……………sach hai jab bhi dil milan ki aas karta hai,udaas hota hai………..to shaam apne -aap jehen mein tir aati hai…………..””kuchh panktiyan meri taraf se……………….ye shaam ka haseen lamha ………..aur unka sath………..bas dua hai yu hi gujar jaye ye din-o-raat”"wonderfulllllllllllllllllllll
bahut hi khubsurat shaam….aur lajawaab anjaam…really nice post
so romantic …………SHAM
Hi,
Ek sher yaad aa raha hai (mera nahi hai)
“Yeh ki tanhai ka Aalum, yeh thaharti Sham aur yeh Aavaragi..
Hum aapne Desh mein hote to Ghar chale jaate” !!
By the way…Aalum, Aagaz aur Anjam tino ko bahot achchhi tarah se aapne prastut kiya hai.
kya kahu sir… aap ki ye kavitaa padh aalum kuch aisa hai bhari dopahar ki dhoop me shaam ka intazaar hai… dil ki becheni shayad aagaaz hai shaam ko kali ghata chhayegi…….. aur joom joom k sawan ko laayegi… suhaane anjaam ki ummid hai… Excellent poem…