Makeover

October 6th, 2010 by Prutha Leave a reply »


She throws her bag & slams the door.
Besides him she sprawls on the floor.

‘Makeover is what I need”
Declares she though he doesn’t heed

While yanking clothes, yelling ‘Makeover, Makeover’
like a maniac she marches all over.

With hard Rock now blaring,
little black dress is what she wearing.

Black dress is bit clinging
& the Neck is bit plunging.

Wearing hills & stirring hips,
Bold Red is how she paints her lips.

Pleased with the effect desired,
she adjusts the thing obviously wired.

Feeling confidant she pours herself a glass.
And like a pro puffs with a class.

Soon feeling tipsy she blows his way.
Tilting his head he gazes at the empty tray.

It’s his known way of showing displeasure.
So She pleads, slurs & pleads some more.

“Dear I am sho done with Mish. Goody Two shooz,
Sho just once let me be a bimbo & booze”

Finally he relents & gets up from his place,
Then without a word starts licking her face.

Smiling she ruffles his hair.
And whispers in his ear,

“Don’t worry honey. Like this I won’t roam in street.
As you know I am far less courageous for it!”

Hearing this he jumps up and down.
Wagging his tail dances like a clown.

Defeated she now feels sore
“Damn! Even dogs don’t like bitches anymore!”

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PS : All those who had left nice comments for my first poem must be now regretting for encouraging me :)


8 comments

  1. Hi…. nice poem :-)

  2. Liked your blog and tried adding you to my Friends List, but couldn’t succeed, there was some or the other error cropping up…

  3. Richard says:

    Hi Prutha, I have been somewhat busy and finally took some time to look at this site again. Am going to catch up with the many pieces of writing that people did. How are you? Hope all is well with you and your family too.

    Have to read your poems again before commenting.

    have a brilliant week.

  4. PGR NAIR says:

    Hi Prutha

    I loved this one..Had a good laugh reading the last line. You have wnderfully created the ambience, sensual and lively one…PGR

  5. rudra says:

    yes, it is a beauty.

  6. Prutha says:

    @ Ben : Thanks Doctor!
    @ Harish kumar: a bit of both :)

  7. hey hey not a bit… was it inspired from someone u met or saw… or pure imagination

  8. Ben Harris says:

    Way to go, Prutha. I like it.

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