Hey this indeed was a decent read. Though mid way you can point out who the killer is… you could try a different way to build up the suspense… and somehow a double role doesn’t really do justice to a short suspense story… Still I’d say a decent read… I’ll try to catch up on your other stories. John
Thanks for your visit and comments. As I had migrated to another site, I wasn’t keeping touch with many here. You are an animated and gifted blogger . Keep blogging…PGR
Hi Prutha,
Thanks for your comment. I have given up trying to get published. Guess I am not good enough. If you still want to read the whole Novel it is on my blogspot blog. BTW, it is called “The long road.” My blog on blogspot has restricted access and if you give me your email, I’ll send you an invite. You just may like it as you were very curious about the fate of HIna, Ranjiv and Sagarika and also wanted to know if Rahul and Sarika lived happily ever after.
Ben
Hi there, Have been reading some of your posts since couple of days. You write extremely well. Just a small suggestion if I may, you might have to check on spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. However, content wise you just can’t be beaten. Excellent.
HI Prutha,
How are you doing. I have sent my Manuscript to the publisher and now await his verdict.
The reason I deleted the previous few posts as they seemed very shallow on retrospection.
Thanks for your good wishes.
Regards
Ben
So finally, i read ur URL completely Now i can judge u..
and also wait for new posts by u btw rediff is being mean to me.. its not allowing me to add anyone in my friend list (mellow)
Well my blogs are on virtual love :S:S I actually wrote all of them to blurt my heart.. Though many pieces are still only in my diary…
I will write sumthing real soon. tc cyah
These days there is nothing in my mind. Or may be there is too much.
So nothing is coming out in form of a post.
Good to know that u like my posts, will try to post something soon.
Ha ha ha ha….what to do sweetie..i am like that I dont get enough time to read friend’s post and so when i sit, i try to read as much as i can in one go and stick to one blog site only at one time…
Hi Prutha,
Please accept my thanks for following the Story of Rajiv and Poonam with so much interest. I have posted the concluding part. Do let me know what you think of it.
Ben
Hi Prutha,
Thanks for jolting me out of inertia. I attempted to take the story forward and realized that it cannot be wrapped up in part III. So it will go further from here. Anyway, part III has been posted. Take a look.
Regards
There is correction intended: my previous comment reads; Please don’t squander ur time here. It meant that my blogs were not pressing for anyone to waste time on. This was intended.
There is another take which I feared: that you don’t spend time here in iland. I will never recommend that to anyone nor take that leeway. Frankly it is as good a medium as anyone wants to make it to be.
Sathya
I used to be a creative writer once upon a time; now more or less in hibernation (a real corny word). Rediff is not my place. If u wish to read my stuff, try these: http://observesathya.blogspot.com http://thinksathya.blogspot.com http://writersathya.blogspot.com
Please don’t squander ur time here unless absolutely washedout and every familiar activity looks a wretch.
Thanks anyway; Ben is a great pal of mine and he is the one reason I visit. Lest he gets angry should I miss out on his stories. Rgds, Sathya
Prutha
I plead guilty as charged on last part of DOCTORS.I did think of writing an entire part on Rahul-Sarika patch up but it turned out too filmy. Very very difficult to write sentimental dialogues without sounding corny. ( That is a skill I probably do not possess.)So I had to gloss over that part. Sorry to disappoint you. Hope my next will be better. And many thanks for your honest feedback.I do appreciate your point of view.
Hi Prutha. The launch went off well. You will find the photos on Facebook. If you have a FB account search for The Long Road .
Prutha
Writing 55 word stories is easy. Try your hands on it. You will enjoy writing the shorties.
Ben
Hey this indeed was a decent read. Though mid way you can point out who the killer is… you could try a different way to build up the suspense… and somehow a double role doesn’t really do justice to a short suspense story… Still I’d say a decent read… I’ll try to catch up on your other stories. John
Hi Prutha
Thanks for your visit and comments. As I had migrated to another site, I wasn’t keeping touch with many here. You are an animated and gifted blogger . Keep blogging…PGR
Thanx for visit..Hows life?
Yes dear.bit too busy as school reopened. Thanks for the concern.Hope everything is fine at ur end.
Hi Prutha,
Thanks for your comment. I have given up trying to get published. Guess I am not good enough. If you still want to read the whole Novel it is on my blogspot blog. BTW, it is called “The long road.” My blog on blogspot has restricted access and if you give me your email, I’ll send you an invite. You just may like it as you were very curious about the fate of HIna, Ranjiv and Sagarika and also wanted to know if Rahul and Sarika lived happily ever after.
Ben
Hey can u just send me an add request?
Here it shows an error while adding frnds 
cyah tc
Hi there, Have been reading some of your posts since couple of days. You write extremely well. Just a small suggestion if I may, you might have to check on spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. However, content wise you just can’t be beaten. Excellent.
Thnx for asking shashwat. Work is just too much rite now so new post seems to b a farfetched dream..
hi how r u
no new blogs?
HI Prutha,
How are you doing. I have sent my Manuscript to the publisher and now await his verdict.
The reason I deleted the previous few posts as they seemed very shallow on retrospection.
Thanks for your good wishes.
Regards
Ben
So finally, i read ur URL completely
Now i can judge u..
btw rediff is being mean to me.. its not allowing me to add anyone in my friend list (mellow)
and also wait for new posts by u
I will write sumthing real soon. tc cyah
These days there is nothing in my mind. Or may be there is too much.
So nothing is coming out in form of a post.
Good to know that u like my posts, will try to post something soon.
So…time to time come to my URL and get inspired
Thanks again…When the next post coming?
Thinku Thinku..:D
Hi
I added something today…do comment
Love
thank you for your heart warming comment
Dear Prutha
Thanks for your visit and comments…Will read some of yours soon…PGR
Prutha,
Monday has gone by and still no part III.
Well. Sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.
Hi prutha…..have a nice day…keep writing..wud definitely love to comment..tkcr..best wishes:)
Hi Prutha,
Waiting for ‘Catch me if you can Part-III’
B
Ha ha ha ha….what to do sweetie..i am like that
I dont get enough time to read friend’s post and so when i sit, i try to read as much as i can in one go and stick to one blog site only at one time…
sorry prutha
Hi Pruha,thanks for ur nice words to my blog…Best wishes:)
Thanks sweetie for nice comments..
Love
hehe thx prutha. good to have u here
Hi Prutha,
Please accept my thanks for following the Story of Rajiv and Poonam with so much interest. I have posted the concluding part. Do let me know what you think of it.
Ben
Thanks for reading through my blog and leaving comment. Yes men too are like that, but the magnitude is not as much !
Hi Prutha,
Thanks for jolting me out of inertia. I attempted to take the story forward and realized that it cannot be wrapped up in part III. So it will go further from here. Anyway, part III has been posted. Take a look.
Regards
Hi
it seems there is not much action.
no new blogs are been written
There is correction intended: my previous comment reads; Please don’t squander ur time here. It meant that my blogs were not pressing for anyone to waste time on. This was intended.
There is another take which I feared: that you don’t spend time here in iland. I will never recommend that to anyone nor take that leeway. Frankly it is as good a medium as anyone wants to make it to be.
Sathya
Always welcome. Drop me a mail at ben_harris@rediffmail.com whenever you have some queries!
I used to be a creative writer once upon a time; now more or less in hibernation (a real corny word). Rediff is not my place. If u wish to read my stuff, try these: http://observesathya.blogspot.com
http://thinksathya.blogspot.com
http://writersathya.blogspot.com
Please don’t squander ur time here unless absolutely washedout and every familiar activity looks a wretch.
Thanks anyway; Ben is a great pal of mine and he is the one reason I visit. Lest he gets angry should I miss out on his stories. Rgds, Sathya
Prutha,
Have made some changes in last episode of Doctors based on your and JBs feedback. Will wait to see if you approve.
Prutha
I plead guilty as charged on last part of DOCTORS.I did think of writing an entire part on Rahul-Sarika patch up but it turned out too filmy. Very very difficult to write sentimental dialogues without sounding corny. ( That is a skill I probably do not possess.)So I had to gloss over that part. Sorry to disappoint you. Hope my next will be better. And many thanks for your honest feedback.I do appreciate your point of view.
Hi. Doctors - XIV is based on your feed back . Check it out. Thanks for your comments.
Have added a blog
pls comment
Hi,
Waiting for your feedback on latter posts of Doctors. It has gone upto part XIII.
Regards
Hello
How are you.
no blogs long time
u said u going through tough time
is every thin under control now??